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By : ThePhantomSockPuppet
  • From ANON - Aubrey on July 29, 2011
    How sad that you never finished this..
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  • From besodeunangel on August 08, 2008
    I like it, it's written very well so far. I agree with you though, I wish there were more fans of L.J. Smith, she's awesome. I really love the books of the Forbidden Game, Julian was hot!! I wanted to name my future son Julian but my husband said no :( Oh well, please update! I've always wanted L.J. Smith to come out with a sequel to Forbidden Game.
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  • From LouisElegantRequiem on May 12, 2008
    Hey, gonna update?
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  • From belixz on November 02, 2007
    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease keep it going iv been dieing for a good fg fic its killing its wicked so far hun .
    see u soon
    b
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  • From ANON - Korrigan on September 08, 2007
    oh my god thank you for writing this I too love L.J Smith and searched all over for the forbidden game fanfic but zilch,zip,nada!I'm reading this just so you know and love it!julian?damn!damn!damn!(HOT)
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  • From ANON - Wolfariusorca on July 18, 2006
    I wish there was more fanfiction too! Thanks for writing one ^_^ I love julian, he should so save her in this story. XD
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  • From ANON - BRP on July 15, 2006
    When I was a teenager, at first, I had trouble dating. I read LJ Smith's books like Forbidden Game Trilogy. I fell in love with Julian. Along with other guys, imaginary and real.

    Julian...is...bloody...hot.


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  • From ANON - BRP on July 15, 2006
    "The sun (shined) golden through the blinds in Jenny’s kitchen" and "isit" sound improper. Please fix them, if u like.

    Interesting story. I get how Jenny feels. Look forward to reading more.


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  • From ANON - BRP on July 15, 2006
    "Friends came, and friends went, and it hurt Jenny every time."

    I get how Jenny feels.

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  • From ANON - LV on February 02, 2006
    Hi,

    Please write more. I really want to know where you're going.

    I love L.J. Smith's Forbidden Game series too. It's one of my favourites. Her Dark Visions one is quite nice as well but I'm touch and go on the rest of her books. So far, this is well written.

    Julian's death... well, it shattered me as is when you're involved in a book you really like. You care for the characters. And his "death" was painful. I've always felt Julian should be the one Jenny ends up with. Not Tom. Tom never loved her like Julian did and she... all she felt was tenderness for Tom. There was no passion and love. No racing heart, no breathlessness. No dying for the next touch. That's not consummate love. What she had with Julian was. Like I said, I was highly disappointed with this ending. So, please, write more.

    - LV
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  • From on December 18, 2005
    GREAT STORY!!!! please update soon.
    ~Nightra
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  • From ANON - Lilium Noir on November 02, 2005
    I like it so far, you're a good writer. Which is rare here I've learned >D To answer your question, there was some sort of family-related tragedy when LJ Smith was writing the last Night World book and she never finished it. As far as I know she's stopped writing.
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  • From ANON - Celric Celia on June 29, 2005
    Well...I see that this story hasn't been updated in awhile...but I do wish you would continue it. The Forbidden Game trilogy is one of my all-time favorite reads...and I think this fanfic has great potential. Keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - ehu on May 11, 2005
    i love this series! i hope that you do continue it. i used to wonder what would have happened if jenny and julian actually got together. i even wanted him to win and get jenny all to himself! lol but yes, please continue!
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  • From ANON - Soph on May 03, 2005
    Holy crap I loved those three books when I was 13. Anyhow, I really like the dullard suburbanite spin you gave to the story and how empty it feels to Jenny. It works well with the original storyline, so I think you should keep to it!

    Soph
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