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By : FairlightMuse
  • From ANON - Lindsey on January 25, 2006
    OMG! the ending of this chapter is so sad, where he says her name. so he actually does remember her! it kinda makes u feel a lil sorry for him... but i really love ur writing! its written in a way that if u start reading it, u can't stop until there is no more to read!! i can't wait to finish this story and read ur others as well!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2006
    Aww a very sweet and sexy fic. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Sick_And_Twisted on January 02, 2006
    I've only read half of the story, but I love it. A very intriguing and beguiling twist to J. M. Barrie's original story. You developed the characters very well. I especially appreciated the details on John and Michael's personalities in the beginning, as well as the view into Peter's immaturity. Also enjoyed the periodic tie-in of "I Promise." I'll be looking for more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Savanna on December 29, 2005
    Your story is amazing! I read all of it in the same day. Addicting, really!
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  • From ANON - SelenityK on December 21, 2005
    I have to say that I love, love, LOVE this story and thanks to you, I can't read another Hook/Wendy story without comparing it to this one. :)
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  • From ANON - emeraldfire on December 18, 2005
    I enjoyed your story immensely! I hope you keep writing. You should do it professionally. I'd buy your books!
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  • From ANON - HoneyBee on November 27, 2005
    Wow. I am speechless. This is the best 'erotic' fanfic I've ever read. You should put this in FF.net or something. Not just mearly an adult fiction or sex stories, this is genuinely a GOOD story. Absolutely GREAT. I couldn't stop reading from the very first chapter until the last chapter, and just kept gone reading. The storylines are flowing like water, and you are using absolutely beautiful prose... Totally amazing. Keep up the good work! A+
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  • From ANON - Huggles on November 22, 2005
    Beautiful story. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - leah B on November 02, 2005
    I loved your story, and it makes me want to
    be a pirate. ^_^ , and it be cool if you did a
    story about their kids life as a pirate.
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  • From ANON - EmilyS on September 24, 2005
    What a wonderful story! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading it -- your Captain Hook was perfectly...yummy. I'm off now to find more of your stories..... thanks so much for posting this!
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  • From ANON - SannM on August 01, 2005
    This is a amazing story that I absentmindly stashed for a rainy day...or in my case a extreme Peter Pan fetish night. From the first chapter till the last I was absolutely thrilled with it. I have always enjoyed Captain Hook as a character more then Peter...of course it could be the bleak thought of spending your life as a child.

    Now, I must say that I have never been a huge fan of Wendy, but you won me over with the tinkerbell scene. The fact that she could do something so...cold...no wonderfully heartless won me over. (I have always dislike that twinkling little fairy...no in every book, movie, and even the bloody disney commercials...okay, I am a little scary about that) Then of course, their is that wonderful scene with Wendy trying to kill a crew mate. I literally laughed out loud, thinking of how she had even changed into Hook's perfect match. Bloody brillant!!!

    I also adored how you played off her family, and of course the punishment for Peter. Wonderful. Excellent story that I will be reading again in the future.
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  • From ANON - Melantha Nocturne on July 28, 2005
    Oh. My. LAWD! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!

    I love the plot, and the way you described everything--it was so clear in my mind, and the research you did is VERY appreciated indeed!! This is a great, great story--I haven't read a novel-length this good in YEARS! I'm off to look at your author page now and see what else you've got! ^_^

    Later Days,
    ~The Black Rose Eglantine
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  • From ANON - Armadillo on July 13, 2005
    SIGHhhhhh... Beautyfull story !

    But ... WILL Wendy and Hook stay happy ? Will they stay even ?? Will Hook's Jealousy strike them down ???
    You still don't let me poor reader know, there still is this invisible Questionmark hanging above the tale
    - AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT !!! (It's not like "...happy happy joy joy ever after"- too much sweetness isn't good for my health...)
    Sequels ? Spin offs ?? YES please !

    "I am still so amazed that anyone had the patience to read all of my long-winded drabble."

    Don't get me wrong - I LOVE steamy graphic details, but they don't seem to fit into the frame of a story set in the victorian age - you developed
    wonderfull characters and "wound" them quite well, that's my opinion anyway...
    Carry on the good work !
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  • From ANON - mariteri on June 06, 2005
    I loved it! The story was sweet and very much in keeping with the characters. One thing though, you might want to get a beta reader as you seem to make a lot of type-os. Speaking as a person that's done that too many times to count, it just makes it easier for the reader if it's clearer to understand. Good work and I hope you keep writing.
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  • From ANON - cold_1 on June 06, 2005
    I thouroughly enjoy all of your stories and am glad that you continue to write! I can't wait to read the next. ;D
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