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Reviews for Peaceful Balance

By : Gabriella
  • From Nem on February 06, 2005
    I love the fact that you begin the story by telling the background. Since we've only known Sansa as the very naïve young girl it's necessary, but you write it like it's natural, not forced. One thing that most writers miss (at leats those on not-for-profit sites like this) is the psychological part. You, however, do not. And you describe it exquisitely... "Yet, she reflected, if she had not gone through what she had, she would have learned nothing. "
    And the transition you make here, from reminiscing the past to the now: "Then, she refused him. / Now--- /Now she refused him nothing." That's beautiful :)
    Sandor's touching her when she's asleep is also beautiful and very erotic, as well as romantic.
    :)
    Good job. Do continue, please.

    (And there is no surpise that you like Furey's Artefacts of Power, Earth's Children and Harry Potter. I must say that I'm quite into the same things...)

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  • From ANON - Shea on January 18, 2005
    Ok... Let me just say. That was amazing. Several reasons.

    1) I love the pairing, and I love that it is even semi-plausible in the context of the stories. Great work.

    2) I think that the way you portrayed each character was flawless. Absolutely Flawless, I almost got the sense that RR Martain had written this little passage himself (given his propensity for sex scenes)

    3) This is, bar non, THE best written adult fic I have ever read. You make it deeper than just the sex. Something a lot of authers forget to do in most of the fics I read.


    Write more, I'm anxious.

    -Shea
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  • From on November 21, 2004
    i hate the pairing but this entices me beyond all reaosn :B

    and i'm going to be writing some theonxjon soon (if ti comes out X__x)
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  • From ANON - iona on November 08, 2004
    Oh! Ye! Seven! Gods! Well done! Having pegged these two characters perfectly, you then treated your reader to some highly enjoyable smut. Thank you - and please do continue!
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