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Reviews for The Garden of Heden

By : Nixofcyzerra
  • From ANON - fan of this story on December 31, 2005
    ONE THING EVE WAS NOT, I REPEAT NOT THE FIRST WOMAN CREATED FOR ADAM. IT WAS LILITH. LILITH DIDNT LIKED ADAM. SHE DIDNT LIKED BEING DOMINATED BY ADAM. AND SINCE SHE WAS MORE POWERFULL THAM HIM. SHE DIDNT HAVE TO OBEY HIM
    GOD WAS VERY PISS OF BY THIS, LILITH DIDINT SREW ADAM. SO GOD BANQUISH HER FROM EDEN. SHE WAS THE FIRST BEING
    KICK OUT OF EDEN. SOON WAS LUCIFER"SATAN" WHO DIDNT LIKED HUMANS VERY MUCH. BECAUSE GOD LOVED THEM MORE THAN THE ANGELS. SO HE BEGAN BITCHING. GOD DIDNT LIKED THAT. SO HE KICKED OUT OF EDEN. BUT SATAN. WAS VERY INOCENT. UNTIL HE MET LILITH"SATAN WAS SO FUCKED" LILITH WAS THE FIRST WOMAN THE DEFEND THE RIGHTS OF WOMAN ALL OVER THE WORLD
    LILITH SAID TO SATAN TO BE CAREFULL BECAUSE THIS WAS THE PLACE OF FALLEN ANGELS, AND THAT THEY WERE ONLY TWO
    SHE AND HIM. LILITH WAS VERY HAPPY BECAUSE SATAN DIDINT KNEW NOTHING ABOUT HER INTENTIONS. THAT UNTIL ONE NIGHT
    SHE DEFILED HIM. SATAN WAS VERY TRUMATIZED BY THE EXPERIENCE. SATAN BEGGED TO GOD TO GET OUT OF THIS PLACE.
    BECAUSE LILITH WAS A RAPIST. GOD GIVE HIM A CHANCE. HIS WORK WAS TO PUNISH HUMANS FOR DISOBEY HIM. HE LIKED
    BUT GOD. WAS VERY TRICK HE SEND HIM TO HELL HE WAS HAPPY UNTIL HE FOUND OUT THAT LILITH CREATED HELL. AND HIS TORTURE LASTED AN ETERNITY, THATS WHY SATAN WANTS TO GET OFF HELL ON GO TO EARTH. TO GET AWAY FROM LILITH
    YOU SEE LILITH WAS THE ORIGINAL DEVIL. SATAN ONLY WORKS FOR HER MISTRISS.

    ', 'fan of this story
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  • From ANON - mecks on December 20, 2005
    HAHA THAT WAS GREAT. i loved it. the punishments mustve sucked though.. sigh. ps wanna meet up sometime? ;)
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  • From ANON - I Want You on December 12, 2005
    HAha Wow. Id like to meet you sometime ;)
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  • From ANON - luna on November 28, 2005
    awesome fic. i'm rolling on the floor. i can't believe it's already over!
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  • From ANON - La la land on November 20, 2005
    L.M.A.O
    that was so halarious!
    keep it comming!
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  • From ANON - Laupar on November 15, 2005
    I don't know why i read this. I think it had something to do with my utter disbelief that anyone could pull off a 'Garden of Eden goes Porn' story that makes me laugh. I stand corrected.
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  • From ANON - luna on November 15, 2005
    yay! you've updated! this fic is getting better and better; can't wait to read the next installment :).
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  • From on November 14, 2005
    congrappulations, you've made my day with your shiny story.
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  • From ANON - Lola on October 18, 2005
    you r a sick sick man you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - luna on October 16, 2005
    BRILLIANT fanfic, it's totally hilarious, well written and damn hot! that's the kind of bible i want to own :). pleeeeaaaase update soon
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  • From ANON - twistie on October 13, 2005
    Well. It's really sick. But it's SO HILARIOUS. The funny thing is, I write like you. Always humor and always wih those commentary. I can't give criticism cause I'm a big fan of writing humor with the brackets. right on.
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  • From ANON - everwanderingsoul on September 14, 2005
    Your story's hilarious. Even as a Christian I have to admit that your satyre rocks! Please keep writing! I need to laugh some more!
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  • From ANON - casualqwerty on August 18, 2005
    twisted but cool, need more to suppress all those years of bible study though ... keep writing 'The NEW&IMPROVED King James Bible'
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2005
    love
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  • From ANON - Peaches on July 31, 2005
    Well... what can I say except that I must be really sick for enjoying that. The story was made all the funnier with you comments. Oh and about the hairless pussy thing; it doesn't necessarily make you have better orgasms but it just looks better when there's no hair down there. I hope you keep up writing!
    Love, Peaches
    P.S: I was shocked nobody has ever swallowed your cum (I personally love it!)
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