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Reviews for Passion in the Dark

By : Siarra
  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2016
    Super hot!!! I may be female, but I still found myself...reacting to your scene. There always was so much sexual tension between those two. Bravo!
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  • From sheraven on December 05, 2007
    Nicely done, I like how it was Drizzt who took the initiative and started it, for a change. I thought the actaul fighting writing was good and I certainly liked the heat of battle was intertwined with the heat of lust. Good one.
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  • From Aresy on October 28, 2007
    lol yeah fighting scenes are difficult, i agree, but a good job. ^^ Really, i was waiting for the main attraction anyways :P. I always liked this one hehe. Come write more..there needs to be more of this pair. ^^
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  • From ANON - Jack Wrath on July 12, 2006
    you get props, i've tried to do fight scenes and had them turn out horribly, but that was pretty good ^_^
    R.A. Salvatore is GOD!
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  • From maiafay376 on January 17, 2006
    Ah, a decent Drizzt story for once. I admit I am planning a story with Drizzt soon, but my Resident evil fics are eating away at my time. I like the pairing, it is one that should be more prevelant than it is. There is so much tension between these two. I am hoping for the one day (though the author stated Enteri and Drizzt will never meet again...shame.) these two will smack heads once more, but I doubt it. Your descriptions are good, and no one seems OOC--which is a plus. All in all, a good read. Hope that satisfies your review wanting...I read your profile, and admit I have whined and threathened for reviews myself. I am not hurting for them, but compared to the amount of hits...the review count is quite low. Straight readers (meaning non authors) here are just plain lazy. They want the story, and even may like it--but it requires effort and time to actually LEAVE a review...and you can't have that! Okay, I'll stop being a snot and sarcastic, but sometimes the lack of reviews pisses me off.
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  • From AnihyrMoonstar on November 23, 2005
    I don't care what you say, I think the fight scene was terribly well written. I've never been able to come up with good battle description, but you did a lovely job (though I will admit *cough* I happened to enjoy the aftermath considerably more...*smirk*) Quite lovely on a whole though. Thank you for posting it!
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  • From ANON - Veronica on August 25, 2005
    WOW. That was HAWT. Lol!
    Admittedly, I know *nothing* of the fandoms you've writ about, but this one intrigued me. I LOVE the idea of enemies in a heated brawl/swordfight/etc., suddenly losing sexual composure. How could you NOT???
    Good show!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - varenoea on August 12, 2005
    Hehe, the parallels between fight and sexual passion... I don't know the fandom, but the plot is nice. (I don't seem to know any of your fandoms, but what the hell, I'll read anything as long as it's good porn!) The hottest thing was the end of the sex scene!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on July 06, 2005
    wow, i think you are wayyyyyy to hard on yourself.. this fic was beautifully written!!!!! repeat after me "damn, i'm a good writer" lol.... but seriously, good job! more please ^_^
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  • From Shehanitan on January 26, 2005
    Wow… Wow!
    I like it! The only problem I have is that these character could have just been another original once for me, I don’t know the fandom.

    But I think you got talent and don’t worry about the fighting scene. It’s not that on that’s important, right? You did it really smoothly that skip from wanting to kill/defeat each other to banging each other good! Of course it could have been even more violent and so on, but this works just fine.
    If it would have been more violent one of the characters need to be a little more of a bad ass. I get the impression that neither really are.

    Just, good work!
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