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Reviews for An Old Fashioned Dream

By : LillyFair
  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on May 08, 2005
    Ahh! I was reading this story, pressing the next chapter button since chapter one, and all of a sudden, there was no more next chapter button! Chapter seven was sweet. It's about time that they got together, and in the music room, no less. I hope that Raoul doesn't cause trouble for them, but I know that he will. Writing evil, trouble causing stuff is too much fun to pass up, I know. Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - angelgirl on March 01, 2005
    Yea they forgive each other! Ahh Raoul! Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - angelgirl on February 18, 2005
    Whoa. At least that's out. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy730 on February 17, 2005
    Wow, this is really good! It sounds like something similiar to another story I've read but it's different enough to be good. Update soon, i wanna read what happens!
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  • From ANON - angelgirl on February 03, 2005
    Aww! that was a cute scene! Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - mangamazoku on February 03, 2005
    hHmm, as much as I love your story, I'm wondering if chapter 5 is just a tad quick and OOC regarding Christine. I do think Erik would be very tempted to take advantage of her in such a compromising situation, however, given that Christine was on the verge of death and drugged, I don't think she would be in the 'mood' for sex. Also it would have been more touching if they had waited until she came to him of free will before they had sex as Erik wanted. Otherwise, I do like where this story seems to be going, and think that making Erik angry at her for the past months is very in character for him (he is a moody little bugger ^_^). Please don't take this as a flame, I love this story and please, write more. This chapter did come off as a bit rushed, and OOC. I am looking forward to seeing how they deal with their little problem with Raoul, and will love reading Eriks feelings on the predicament. ^_^ Keep up the good work, but try to keep the characters in character. ^_^Ending on a happy note, your writing is lovely and your story is more creative than most. This is one of my favorite E/C stories.

    Your humble reviewer,

    M.M. =^._.^=
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  • From ANON - Angel Marie on January 30, 2005
    Ok, hi again. Yea, I just reread what my first original post was, and yea, hehe, I really should reread those things more often. Dear God, I appear to be a schizophrenic in my last reply compared to my first. Yea, I still stand on my "All-Hate-Raoul" thing and that he is out of character, but now that you have built up the storyline better, I am finding that his actions fit in better with the reasons and such. He simply is just too insecure and jealous of anyone and everything that Ms. Daae sees, touches or is surrounded by; that boy needs therapy (or to jump off a bridge. either are pretty good). tehe. But, I still stand on what I have said, no matter the difference in opinions in either posts; no matter the confliction in my opinion, I would not have wasted the time and energy to say it. So, take my advice, and reread any posts you made prior to posting again! LoL.

    Keep up your writing!

    Much Love
    Angel Marie
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  • From ANON - Angel Marie on January 30, 2005
    Well, I'm glad that my criticism helps. I love where this is going! You must continue soon or else I shan't know what to do. There are still the few grammer errors, such as sentences that need to be punctuated and such, but aside from that not much else. Your writing gives good detail and explaination to the characters and their behaviour. Honestly, as often as Raoul is played out of character,this is the role I can most likely see him being. Under such stress from the memories of Erik and the love he and Christine shared; that is a huge undertaking, one that can destroy.

    Brava, Brava, Bravisima! Continue soon, please! I long for more.

    Much Love
    Angel Marie
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  • From ANON - Skimbleshanks on January 26, 2005
    Would anybody other than Erik (for the sole purpose of stealing his fun) object to me killing Raoul myself?
    I would sincerely enjoy the slow and torturous act! How DARE he do that to her!
    Hope Erik gives the little *beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep* what he deserves!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    I don't think I ever can!

    Mwah, Luv Skimbleshanks!
    xxxMeowxxx

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  • From ANON - angelgirl on January 25, 2005
    Thank God she's not dead! Damn Raoul! Look at what your stupid temper did to her! Update soon please!!!!
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  • From ANON - yami on January 24, 2005
    *gasp* whats ginna happen?! update please!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 24, 2005
    Wow,
    awesome story!
    I really like the way everyone is characterized. o_o
    Good job!
    I hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - angelgirl on January 24, 2005
    At least Christine has the ring. And I hope Raoul doesn't hurt her! If Erik saw he would come right in wihtout thinking I bet! Grr. Raoul should burn in Hell. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Meg on January 24, 2005
    Great suspense at the end, it's killing me to know the outcome. Great story!
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  • From angedelamusique on January 24, 2005
    I like the plotline of this story. It's not as original as it could be but with all the POTO fic's showing up, featured either during or after the movie/book/both, its hard to make an original writing. There are some areas where the sentence structure and spelling needs major helps. Do you have a beta?
    Please don't take this as a flame; if you read other places where I have reviewed, I give much with the constructive criticism. I like where you are going with this; it has more of a book feel than movie feel. I enjoy the writing style you use, and the fact that Erik went to the trouble of purchasing a home for Christine and himself; so much the book.
    As for the "Arg-I-Hate-Raoul-He-Should-Be-Evil-&-Cruel-All-Hate-Him' approach, I am guilty of using it too, but not to the extent of abuse. Violence, yes, threats, yes, but never does he hurt, or even touch Christine in a harmful way. I must agree with Jula on this from a previous post of hers: Raoul is not evil, but blinded by love. And for this he is turned into the villian of the story. When, in truth, is Erik not at fault for feeling the same way about Christine; does he not do things because of his love for her that he would not do normally?(think movie on that one; in the book Erik is a sadistic s.o.b.)
    Sorry, I kind of ranted there, but think about it; you've made Raoul into this abusing, hating, jealous, probably cheating(just judging by his behaviour) man all because he is overly concerned for the well being of his young wife. Just try not to do as the seemingly endless stream of new fan fic writers appear to be doing and make Raoul into more of a villian than he really is. Yes, hate him all you want; just be true to his character.
    I repeat, this isn't a flame. PROMISE!! I like your writing; the main points of this really long review are you need a beta(or a better one if you have one) and that you need to be more accurate to the characters created by Gaston and redone by Andrew. You have artistic license; don't abuse it.

    Keep up the good writing!

    Much love
    Angel Marie
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