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Reviews for Live Prey ( Used to be Welcome to the Jungle)

By : ozumasgirl
  • From ChibiBerry on March 29, 2008
    wow..im really sad now..this is such a great story..but you ahven't updated in a long time..sniff sniff. Even though your grammar and wtv crap is not perfect..this story is still wonderful! Everything is so well done..thnx for writing! And if you have the time..please update..i really want to see what happens next! lol..8D
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  • From ANON - SnakeMistress on July 19, 2005
    defiantly defiantly loved this. This is by far one of the best B/A fics i've come across yet. andi spend many hours searching for fics of all yaoi/ slashy kind. anyway. this was great and i can't wait to see what happens next. up date again soon please. ja matte ne till then
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  • From ANON - mike on March 05, 2005
    Dear Ozuma girl!
    I truly enjoyed the story, partly just because I adore everything that has to do with Artemis/Butler(I'm gay, and I adore that
    pairing, OK?), but also because I like your imagination, and the way you are putting words to feelings that can be
    difficult to describe properly. Now, I saw in the 6:th chapter, I think, that you yourself did not consider your grammar
    and spelling as flawless. Myself, I've seen much that is worse. Still, I think there are points which you could improve,
    and since you mentioned it yourself, and since I think that you have something more to give than many fan-authors do,
    AND since I would really like to read more from you in the future, I think you should perhaps consider finding a Beta-reader.
    It might prove advantageous for you as well as for your readers, and not only in this forum, but in life "out there" as well.
    Me, I am a good beta reader, have done a few works for friends, and although I must admit English is not my first language
    - or actually it might be because of that- I am considered good at English grammar and such things, and I enjoy doing beta-works.
    What I am trying to say is, that I like your story a lot, and the way you write, and if you would ever want a beta-reader, I would be
    honoured to help you. Just e-mail me if you find the proposal to be an interesting one. Yours sincerely
    Michael Johnsson
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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on February 26, 2005
    Oh, come on! You can't stop it there! That's mean, that is. *pouts* I really like this fic, so please update soon. *bats eyelashes. aka doe style*
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