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Reviews for Melt in your Mouth (aka Wonka's Willy)

By : puremalevolence
  • From ANON - Slash This Yaoi on September 24, 2006
    As you can see, I'm currently reading all of your fics. Muahaha, I loved this one's ending. His personality was so on cue..You are a genius.
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  • From ANON - Anime Lust on January 08, 2006
    Rather unusual but I liked it. I personally thought Wonka might do something to Violet in return after she sucked him off but it's still a pretty good story.
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  • From semisweetandnuts on December 12, 2005
    Odd combo of the two movies, like Wilder movie but with the Depp Wonka in it. A rather OOC Depp Wonka I'd say, Wilder Wonka seems much more the pedophile type to me as Depp Wonka seems rather asexual and uninterested in the children. However, it's well written and funny.
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  • From LSMarz on October 27, 2005
    LOL! Oh if only real come was chocolate... men would walk around so much happier. That's like the ultimate fantasy... yum!
    Loved the story and realized I had not reviewed it. So here I am. Again, I love the crossing of taboos.

    I don't understand anyone who would come to a Willy Wonka fanfic section on an adult website and be shocked to see child/adult sex. Give me a break. Obviously they've never delved into HarryPotterfics. Now there's some twisted shit. And those people aren't even appealing! Sheesh.

    Oh... ok... maybe Willy should have brought Violet's mom into the closet or Grandpa Joe. I bet Mrs. Gloop would have given really good head or maybe he could have just fucked her up her fat ass.

    OF COURSE WILLY IS GOING TO BE WITH A CHILD...HE'S A CHILD HIMSELF! Well, there is some arrested development going on there, somewhere. Of course he's most viable with Charlie...*hint*smile*roll eyes*hint*

    Enough rant...

    This was well written, as are all your stories. I loved the little twists and turns and details that are so true to even the most minor canon characters.

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    Pedophile crap... This is disgustingly realistic... A *child*, you sicko...
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  • From on September 01, 2005
    Mmmmm... :) I just adore stories like this to endulge my inner sicko! Letting loose ideas like this in our fantasy world is what keeps all the REAL kids safe. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your portrayal of Wonka is delicious, even though I STILL kept imagining the Gene Wilder Wonka... maybe because it seems like you kept all of the aspects of the older film besides Mr. Wonka himself.

    More Wonka please.... have you tried your hand at Wonka/Charlie?
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  • From ANON - *Veruca_Salt* on July 31, 2005
    lol....I wish I were Violet.....with Depp willy wonka..*dirty thought *dirty thought*
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  • From KatharinetheLolita on July 28, 2005
    Wow, he has no shame! Hehe... good job on this!
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  • From ANON - InnocenceKept on July 24, 2005
    Yay more Willy Wonka fanfiction! *Ish on a hunt* ^^;; heh heh.....

    Anyway, I really liked your story. I am a little in agreement with a few other reviewers on the "disturbingly pleasant" part but only a little. I overall really enjoyed it, and I thought you did an excellent job on portraying their personalities very well. The plot was written nicely, and I completely agree with the one reviewer who mentioned how Wonka would have issues living in seclusion for so long and needed some...gratification..
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  • From ANON - BooperB on July 24, 2005
    I agree with a previous reveiwer "disturbingly pleasant" It was very obvious to me that Wonka in the fic was not meant to be human. I mean his eyes turned pink for goodness sake XD.
    It was written very well ^^.
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  • From ANON - thehomicidalmaniac777 on July 22, 2005
    dude, that was messed up, an 11 year old...oh well all is good and well though. I couldn't resist reading it if it had wonka in it...doing...things...if you catch my drift*wink wink* anyways, it was well written keep up the good work! bye! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ryo on July 19, 2005
    This was disturbingly pleasant. I'm usually not into adult/child sexual incounters... but... that was just hot. I would have loved to have been Violet there.
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  • From ANON - Just me. on July 17, 2005
    I liked this for a number of reasons. One, your characterization of Wonka was dead on. I mean, the guy's got a few issues, and isn't quite aware of what is and is not socially acceptable because he's been locked away for so many years. Plus, any man would want a little 'gratification"...especially a lonely recluse. >_> The chocolate bit at the end amused me, and it's not like this was poorly written (AKA "he shuved his cok in vilet's mouth") So don't listen to the close-minded bastards who say it sucked. I can totally see it happening.
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  • From ANON - Eww again. on July 11, 2005
    Mabye it would have worked better if she was atleast a teenager.
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  • From ANON - Eww again on July 11, 2005
    Ewww first dog molestation now Child Molestation,i know Johnny Depp's hott but....your sick.
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