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Reviews for Night Moves

By : xevaral
  • From DarkasNight on April 17, 2008
    this is a great story, maybe you wouldn't mind writting for the PDSarchive for anita blake fan fiction? its: http://www.pommedesang.com/efiction

    we'd love to have you there and if you wouldn't mind, cheack out our forum at: http://www.pommedesang.com/pdsbb/index.php
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  • From DarkasNight on December 23, 2007
    i was wanting to say i really like your story and if possible maybe you might want to try posting it at www.pommedesang.com in the arcive there, i'd love to see this updated soon your write very well
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  • From ANON - audrey on September 20, 2005
    oh wow. I'm speachless. This is a wonderful, original, thoughtful story. Please do continue!
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  • From ANON - Apollo on May 30, 2005
    You asked about if anyone knows a beta - Well, just to let you know - AFF has it's own beta group right now, designed to help connect beta's and authors. It can be found at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders/

    Apollo

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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 29, 2005
    I would give you a much better review if I didn't have a splitting headache. I'll give you this much. It is well written and I find it intriguing. Please continue writing. Thanks.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - BC on April 26, 2005
    I love it! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lyra Maxwell on April 16, 2005
    This is the first story i've been compelled to review off of AFF.net. I had to ask who your therapist was :-P. Not really. In all actuallity, I simply thought the story was well-written, and accurately detailed. I like to congradulate a job well done. Please continue writing, I'd really like to see some of the other sessions among the group.
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  • From ANON - E on April 16, 2005
    Really good, hope there´ll be more soon. Btw, will Asher be the one that Ethan falls for?
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 14, 2005
    O.K. Jason was realistic. But I always thought he was willing to swing both ways, just preferred girls. On the other hand, Jean Claude didn't bit Anita right away. But if you need it for your story, O.K. I did think you let Anita break too easily. I don't think she would let your smug OC get to her so quickly. I can't wait to see what you do with Asher! Is Death comming to your party too? And what about the sparks between JC and your character? That office was a bit of a give away. WHY did he make it so perfect?
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 12, 2005
    Interesting! I like the concept of group therapy, because if anyone needs it, this group does. I'm worried about the interest Dr. Jones is showing in JC. Is he suseptable to vamps, really hot guys, or him in particular. How will that square with Anita? Oh, and those hints about his "usual" clients has me salivating. Who, or what, does he normally see? I can't wait for the fireworks to begin!
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