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Reviews for sleepover sensuality

By : englishwitch2003
  • From ANON - Fewlimits77 on March 13, 2015
    There still needs to be more of this story. It is just too hot to ignore.
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  • From coldfang66 on April 01, 2014
    This was extremely hot, but ended way too quickly. Have you considered writing a sequel or a companion?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2006
    Holy dear christ, that was good! Oh, I wish you wrote more!
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  • From ANON - uberepicure on June 09, 2006
    very well done and I hope you will do a sequel or continuation one day. 5 out 5 stars!

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  • From ANON - Lemon critic on January 24, 2006
    It's a great story. You should consider making it a little longer, more threesomes.
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  • From ANON - Darkangelous on November 28, 2005
    Alright the story was pretty amazing it impressed and the flow of it was well done. However spellcheck does good but it doesn't catch everything take the time to read over your story after using spellcheck just to be safe. The text mishaps weren't plentiful and you could still understand what was being said but it did interrupt the flow and general move things reminded you that it was just a story at some of the wrong times. but other than that the story was amazing and I'd look forward to reading some of your other stories.
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  • From ANON - LadyImperialdramon on November 25, 2005
    You should've had Ax get Rachel pregnant, man. A human giving birth to a Andalite... Take about innovative! Even Fanfiction.net's Animorphs section wouldn't be able to ignore the shockwaves of that plot twist!

    Better yet, both Erek and Toby catch Shinto-Taga, Marco gets Toby pregnant (with a human baby) and Erek somehow gets Cassie pregnant with a baby Chee as the result!
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  • From ANON - mamimi on November 18, 2005
    This was definatly the best fan fic ever!!! EVER!!! I like that it makes sence, its not like jake just sudenly decides to have an orgy, it makes sence, and explains its explainations... the andalite mutation thing was genuis, i think you should continue this, maybe not all at once, i just mean like add a chapter every now and then, a month is a very long time... Please o please continue this series...
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  • From ANON - Gokugonecrazy on November 12, 2005
    you rock at writing these so write more please.
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  • From ANON - Mavric on October 28, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2005
    dear god more please! The best Animorph fanfic I've ever read. Tell us more about the camping trip.
    Stopping now is cruel and unusual.
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  • From ANON - anon on August 25, 2005
    End? Already? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I can see a talented writer like yourself getting another 10 pages out of this idea!
    I understand If you're getting bored with it, but please, occasionally try and see if you can squeeze another chapter out.
    I love your work.
    hoping for more, ANON.
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  • From ANON - JD on August 13, 2005
    Great job (thanks for the dedication, by the way). HOWEVER, I think you may have ended it way to soon. You at LEAST should have let Jake, Cassie and Rachel have there orgasms at the end. And also, Cassie and Rachel were attracted t each, why did the homosexuality stop there? Not that I don't mind or anything, I don't, it just seems a little unfair. Anyway, other than that, great fic.
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  • From ANON - JD on August 10, 2005
    I will track you down and kill you if you don't finish this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    FINISH
    please
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