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Reviews for Lifelines

By : Macx
  • From ANON - Bunta on June 07, 2005
    Damn. You were doing so well up until the end. As soon as the "secret" is revealed, you just avalanche into something grainy and boring. After that point, the writing is not as good as the rest of the fic, and I was too annoyed and just plain BORED to read past the kiss.

    But kudos for everything before the kiss. Very nice.
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