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Reviews for Wonderland

By : MistressOfDarknessAndShadow
  • From ANON - ??? on August 12, 2005
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on August 08, 2005
    Greetings Despair,
    Ooooo, I love your story! I like how, despite that Alice and Hatter are seen as hideous to the rest of society, they are two good people.
    Their costumes are divine. The Hatter turned me on, hehe. He wears a mask, and has soulful eyes, like the Phantom of the Opera. He also reminded me of Jareth, King of the Goblins. When I first heard about the Chesire Cat being the villain, I laughed. A big, fat playful cat playing the villain! Then I read about his description and demeanor, and...whoa...I hate him and desire him. Note: Desire not for him to rape, but to seduce, hehe. Have you read the other Alice tales in which the Hatter is sexy but evil? I don't like how he tortures Wonderland creatures, but I so like how he seduces Alice, hehe. OOOOooo, I love this story. When you can, please resume this dark, delicious tale.
    PS...are the Chesire Cat and Hatter brothers?
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  • From ANON - mara on August 05, 2005
    I LOVE IT please keep writing
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  • From ANON - J on August 01, 2005
    Please do continue, if there is more to come! *fingers crossed*
    Even if you have a few teensy weensy spelling errors, this is fab! I mean, the whole setting in general and the story's plot really is good!
    Keep up the good work.
    x
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  • From ANON - Anna on July 24, 2005
    Oooh! Bravo! I can't wait for more ;)


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  • From ANON - randomredsleep on July 23, 2005
    I got to the fourth chapter without even realizing it! This story is shaping up to be quite excellent! MORE PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on July 23, 2005
    I am very pleased with the way this story has turned out thus far in these first four chapters.
    Not only have you given us some new twists to chew upon, but painted the idea of Wonderland in out minds quite well.
    I look forward to your next chapter with great zeal and urge you to produce it as soon as possible...

    Oh screw it.

    As your Princess, I COMMAND you to continue this story.

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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on July 23, 2005
    I'm love with this one, it's refreashing to find someone who has pinned the Cheshire Cat as the bad guy, the Mad Hatter as the good guy (with very intrigueing eyes) and the White Rabbit as a woman. I applaude you on these first four chapters and I look forward to the next one.

    HAZZA! HAZZA! HAZZA!
    Ok, where are my balloons so as I pop one for each minuet that passes until the next chapter is posted?
    What?! I ran out of balloons!
    Guess I'll have to go back to dragging a nail across the chalk board.
    Breaking mirrors?! HA! I might be crazy but I'm not stupid.
    *drags nails very so slowly across the length of the chalk board*
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