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By : BellaLaura
  • From ANON - Phantomforever on January 15, 2006
    Oh yes, yes!! Fantastic!!! Great plot line, dashing, strong Erik -- classic unsure but lovely Christine -- more, we want more!!
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on January 15, 2006
    Greetings,
    This story is kick-ass. Oooo, to have Erik as a teacher/boss. ;). Just to let you know, if u want to fix it, but after Chapter 5, the next chapter says: 6: Chapter 7.
    I can feel how Christine feels. Sometimes, I think she overdoes it with snapping at Raoul. But I get how she feels, hehe. Raoul just doesn't get/respect her dreams. Thats not kewl.
    I look forward to reading more. Please continue when you can. Well, on to reading other wonderful stories.

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  • From Debs on January 14, 2006
    MORE PLEASE! absoutely fantastic. I love seeing Erik in a modern setting, so funny Christine's narative about sex with Roul. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on January 12, 2006
    Wow, this one is really, really good! Brilliant idea with her thoughts in between the chapters. And Raoul's such an idiotic dick - I love that! *lol* ;)
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  • From ANON - Anne on January 08, 2006
    OMG! I just finished reading this and OMG! Can't wait for the interview! Raoul is a dumbass. Had to get that out.
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 07, 2006
    Yea, she blew Raoul off and is now set to meet with 'him'. Unfortunately, she is married....darn. She is however quite hot for a certain green eyed tall male and I wonder if he's going to get a clue as to her feelings? We shall see.........
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  • From ANON - BRP on January 07, 2006
    May I suggest something, though?
    Are Raoul and Christine going to stop loving each other, divorce, then see other people?
    I know that doesnt always happen smoothly in real life, but still.
    Or, is Raoul going to be evil, and so, Christine must leave him?
    I hope she doesn't cheat on both great guys, Raoul and Erik.
    Its your story.
    Its still bloody amazing.

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  • From ANON - BRP on January 07, 2006
    Hello Bellasera,
    What a wonderful talent you have. I look forward to reading more in the future.

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  • From ANON - Marie on January 07, 2006
    Sadly, Christine is not happy in her marriage. Her imaginings in the bathtub were quite hot, and sadly it wasn't her husband she was thinking about. I hope she meets her dream lover soon. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - Pertie on January 07, 2006
    Oops! Sorry about the prior review....I wasn't paying attention to what I was doing and I posted the review in the wrong story. Please forgive me. This story is actually very good and I like it a lot! It's in the right place and I hope you continue it.
    My negative review was meant for a story called "Challenge". I apologize profusely. I am embarrassed at my mistake and rightly so.
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  • From ANON - Pertie on January 07, 2006
    I have to agree with the Anonymous reviewer. I didn't realize your writing history. Please don't deface POTO with what you prefer to write. If there is indeed a 'pure porn' section (really?) go post whatever there and most of us won't know what you're up to with your creative endeavors. There's a place for everything on the internet, just put it in the right place please. This particular vein of stories actually has some very good writing on it. What you want to write doesn't belong here.
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 06, 2006
    Great chapter. Sadly enough Christine doesn't seem too happy in her marriage (to the gorgeous but boring Raoul). Her imaginary lover was HOT beyond belief. Hope she gets a taste of the real man behind the green eyes and log fingers. Thank you for updating.
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 05, 2006
    You're back...yipee! Great chapter too! I loved it when you started it, and was so sad when it seemed you had left it. Now I am thrilled again!
    I love your Christine, and I hate, hate, hate, big headed Raoul! E/C..all the way. I am very much looking forward to what is next.
    Thank you for updating too.
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  • From ANON - Pertie on January 05, 2006
    Good lord woman, I long gave up on this story and then *BOOM* you come back, and with a strong chapter! I hope you plan to keep this story going since it is quite unusual and very well written.
    The only thing I have to say about Christine is she needs to get herself a life, and rid herself of being someone's trophy.
    Thanks for updating. 'Twas worth the (very) long wait.
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  • From ANON - challen on October 09, 2005
    i think i should have waited for more chaps before i read it. now i feel like christine did last night with raoul. unsatified. please update soon. i know this will be good.
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