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Reviews for This One Night

By : spikesbint
  • From ANON - Marumae on December 27, 2006
    *SIGH* That was so good, so sweet. *_* OH so far you are my favorite Phantom pr0n writer let me tell you. *sniffles*. So good.
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  • From PhantomMiddleEarthLover on November 15, 2005
    I wanted to tell you how moving and charming this story was. Somehow it always feels that Christine is committing adultery with Raoul...since we know who she should be with ;) Erik, my love, a gentleman...honorable to the end.
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  • From ANON - kristina on October 20, 2005
    Oh, this is probably one of the best one shots i've ever read. Brava!
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  • From ANON - heather on October 03, 2005
    So beautiful. You are a wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - an-angel-in-hell on September 21, 2005
    hi! i didn't know you posted here! this was good. update Forget Me Not soon!
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  • From ANON - Salomé on September 21, 2005
    This story is sooo beautiful! *sigh* I love it. You're very talented.
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  • From doctorkaty on September 19, 2005
    I have to agree with Krystiane on this one - it is really refreshing to see a new and different plot.
    I really liked this fic it was beautifully written.

    Katy
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  • From Josephine1881 on September 19, 2005
    Thank you.
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  • From Josephine1881 on September 04, 2005
    A very good story - touching and erotic. There is but one little thing: "She put her hands between their bodies to touch his swollen cock." *smash* Did you hear that? It was the romantic atmosphere breaking at this point. I´m not prudish (otherwise I wouldn´t be here) and I think that there are many stories in which words like ´cock´ and ´cunt´ add to the atmosphere. But here... it just made me look up and say "What?". I don´t know what others think about it, but I´d have appreciated it if you had used ´manhood´.
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  • From ANON - Britt on September 04, 2005
    Christ, that was beautiful. And, oh God, so sad. I needed a good cry; I feel much better now, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Krystiane on September 03, 2005
    Wow. Truly one of the best phanphics I have ever read. The length was quite refreshing, as well as the grammar and spelling. I love how you intertwined the plot of your story with the ending of the movie. Stunning. And the plot was VERY nice--a welcome change from the normal "Christine and Erik have sex and forget about Raoul and go off and live happily ever-after and Raoul is never heard again" or "Christine and Erik have sex and forget about Raoul and go off and then Raoul comes back for vengeance and Erik kills him and then they live happily ever after".

    Beautiful. The one thing I would nitpick about is something you should NOT FEEL BAD ABOUT. This is something I see too often in E/C phics, and it's not just you/your fault. In all the sex scenes--except for one, "Sweet Sixteen"--it seems like Erik never gets ANY FOREPLAY. Christine does, but he doesn't. Come on, people. Erik is extremely sensitive, and he has also never really been touched intimately by a woman. Can you imagine the fun Christine could have with that?! *snerk*

    *cough* I cut myself off with the ALL-FAMOUS SNERK. I don't want to rant in this review. I loved your story; it was beautiful. I shall be looking for more from you.
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on September 03, 2005
    Hi Spikes bint,
    Glad to see you back here. This story was mostly interesting and mostly well-written. At top of last paragraph, there are several sentences crashing into each other.
    "Raoul placed the music box on her grave, he stood back to sit in his chair, when he noticed the red rose, resting on the edge of her gravestone." The tale seemed a bit rushed. There was a funny section.
    Christine: Do me now, Erik.
    Erik: I will. But, pooh, I dont know what to do.
    Christine: Thats ok...never mind...here, let me lead.
    Poor Erik. He could have gone off and lived a life of his own, with another woman, who truly loved him. Instead, he lingered behind...hoping to steal a little bit of another man's woman, another man's happiness.
    The last man I dated did just that. Before we dated, while we dated, and after we dated.
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