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Reviews for ANOTHER WHOLE LIFETIME

By : nixwilliams
  • From ANON - Hexagon on August 27, 2006
    I like this one, too! Very poetic.
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  • From ANON - Erika on January 29, 2006
    Pretty good. It had to be if I bothered to review.
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  • From amazingenthusiasto on January 09, 2006
    I love drabbles. The current rating (3 stars) isn't quite deserved. I understand that some may be quite confused by this ficlet, but you've done a good job, in my opinion.

    The detail and poetry that you've packed in between those two lines of the movie is awesome. As for the complaints about "not enough sex" I believe you have more than hinted at an adult relationship. The lines about a grown woman peering out from child's eyes, they details in brackets, it indicates that there was something worth reading into. I am of the idea that for a fic to be "adult" it doesn't have to be "explicit."

    Great Job.

    ~AmazingEnthusiasto~
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  • From ANON - nabootheenigma on January 07, 2006
    I like this pairing... well, the hints of it you give in this wee story. I want more. Poor Lucy, poor Tumnus. And I can't remember from reading the books in my childhood - do they get back together?

    But, where is the SEX?! It is ADULT fan fiction dot net, you know. If you turn this into a longer piece (and I think you should) then I want some raunchy faun-human action (maybe Tumnus finds himself drawn to Edmund?! Just to add that element of ANGST that all hot sexbloits need) - otherwise stop waisting everyone's time with these ridiculously short sexless prose poems. Go back to art school!
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  • From ANON - headnut69 on January 06, 2006


    It's got a good start will there be more? I hope so. I think you've got a good set up please write more I'd like to read it. thank you.
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  • From nixwilliams on January 06, 2006
    thank you for reviewing. mena, the notes state quite clearly that the story is PG. if you don't want to "waste your time," i suggest you use your discretion. as for the writing being "teen level," i wonder if you mean to imply that adults do nothing but screw like bunnies every waking minute and have no feelings other than lust?
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  • From ANON - Faery on January 05, 2006
    That was very poignant...almost like a poem. I really enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - Mena on January 04, 2006
    Post PG rated stuff on other sites; this site is for hard R and higher ratings. You're wasting our time with this teen level writing.
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  • From ANON - hermioneandseverysfan82 on January 04, 2006
    good story
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