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Reviews for Birthday Wishes

By : Crazi
  • From lordoberon on June 23, 2010
    I LOVED it! Sooo cute how they interact together, and I love how Peter is such a comfort to Edmund. I only wish the bedroom scene had been longer...and more detailed....:D it was hot!

    There needs to be more Peter/Edmund out here. Can you write more?
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  • From lordoberon on March 07, 2008
    Oh I love this! You have got me hooked onto this pairing! Thank you so much for introducing me to it!

    I just wish this were rated R....:D

    I didn't think that chapter 2 served the story much. But the relationship between these two is adorable. I like Edmund's darker personality and Peter's joy and sunshine. I can see them being like that, they seemed like that in the books.

    I am so glad that Peter liked Edmund back, because in the first chapter I thought it was unrequited love. I really love the last part...except I wanted more details on what they were doing. =3 Lovely fic! I shall check out that Narnia Slash community. :D
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  • From ANON - Mayo on August 03, 2006
    O_O
    I like it. >:D
    Like, you cant describe how much a do. I searched everywhere for a story like this! ^_^
    continue, continue!! >:D
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  • From ANON - Ari on January 16, 2006
    ...Just beautiful... *Wipes the tears off her face* They're so adorable together! Ed and Peter sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Oh I love it how you made them so... lovesick? It gets my attention! I'm also wondering why the Lucy and Susan don't even suspect a thing... Naive maybe? XD

    Hope you update it soon, because this is AWESOME,
    Ari
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  • From on January 15, 2006
    This is the first story that I have read with this pairing, and I have to say that you’ve sparked an interest in me. I don’t normally read incest, but this is very interesting. The story flows very well, and the characters don’t seem to have clichéd speeches. Keep up the good work! ^^ And do update soon, I’m itching to find out what happens after this.
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  • From ANON - Jaklyn on January 14, 2006
    AWWW!!! They re so cute together. i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter *hinthintnudgenudgewinkwink* update soon...please? i'll never stop reviewing as long as you keep writing. it's a win-win situation! so come on...you know you wanna update for good ol' Jaklyn!
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  • From ANON - Ru-chan on January 10, 2006
    Please please continue this fic. It's pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on January 10, 2006
    I'm...confused. Your second chapter is kind of the same as the first one. Was this intentional?
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  • From ANON - Mona on January 08, 2006
    OMG update really really soon I love it!
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  • From bloodstaindstoat on January 07, 2006
    :paws: Please write more! What you've got thusfar is great. ^_^
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