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Reviews for Oh, Lolly, Lolly

By : BrandiDelain
  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2008
    Awesome story. ^.^ I love the detail you put into it. It's wonderful when you read something and you can picture everything in perfect detail in your mind. I love the way you write. Keep it up! :)
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  • From Neonette on December 05, 2007
    I love the use of humor in this story! Wouldn't mind hearing about more of Wonka's dirty sexscapades in this style!
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  • From Finality on June 29, 2007
    that was quite delightful. and very hot. excellent job~

    ~
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  • From ANON - Mesopotamia on August 20, 2006
    A bit out of character for him but who the hell cares! How can a story be hot, clever, and funny at the same time? This was very well written!
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  • From ANON - Shimmeree on August 09, 2006
    I haven't seen the movie yet, but this is fabulous. That sucker was truly enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - anasazi on January 25, 2006
    To quote:
    Oh god, don't stop!!
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  • From JackieLeep on January 08, 2006
    Oh, my freakin' god! That third chapter was one of the hottest damn oral sex scenes I've ever read! (My undies sure are wet right now!) I do wish there was more, though! I wanted to read some more action with that cock of his! I wanted her to get to fuck him, too. (Okay, I'll cool down now...)

    I'll never view a lollipop the same way again... Hot damn! That was one sizzling read!
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  • From ANON - katie on January 07, 2006
    YAH! That was awesome! Are you going to continue?? Please!
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  • From ANON - Justine on January 07, 2006
    Lovin it! continue please?
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  • From Frodo on January 07, 2006
    What a wonderful writing. I liked it a lot. :D

    Good job, keep writing.

    x3 Aeron Rhiannon
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  • From Louk on January 07, 2006
    Very interesting, I look forward to the continuation.
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  • From JackieLeep on January 06, 2006
    Oooohhhh!!!! I've really enjoyed this story so far!! You sure had more fun trapped in a closet than R. Kelly did in his "Trapped in a Closet" series of songs!

    BTW: I can't really conjure up any sympathy for someone who's freaking out over turning THIRTY! I passed that milestone a long time ago and, ya know what, I'm still getting a lot of action (yes, that kind) in my 'real life' and my energy and libido ain't going anywhere anytime soon.

    But, seriously, this is turning out to be one hell of a hot and extremely well-written story! A tip of my hat to you, girl!!!!
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  • From ANON - Justine on January 06, 2006
    Oh! I love it! Please tell me you will continue it?!? Not like these other bums who start a story and NEVER finish it (or take like a million years to update...you know there ARE people who read stories here...*huffs*). Please update! I want MORE!!!!
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