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Reviews for Pectus Pectoris Infractus

By : SKC
  • From ANON - Kris on March 31, 2008
    Darn you for not writing more...darn you!!!
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  • From ANON - Lizette on March 05, 2008
    Please continue this story.After I read it,I was depressed for a week.No lie.My sister read it and it depressed her too.Please don't make this the end of Charlie and Wonka.It's the most beautifully written fanfic I've ever read.
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  • From runningwithcoyotes on December 14, 2007
    *blows nose and rubs eyes* gah, you made me cry. Again. I bawl everytime I read this, but I still come back reguarly. I love torturing Willy, horrible as I am. heh, I love angst in ALL forms.

    And I like how they didn't get their happy ending, it's so cliche that everything always ends with hearts and roses. So I was very pleased that it didn't.

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  • From ANON - Soof on November 10, 2007
    You nearly had me crying at the end... Good fic.
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  • From shoujokitsune on August 16, 2007
    So sad, but very well written though. There was a perfect measure of flashbacks to give enough detail of the situation while not taking away from the plot or being too distracting. The only character I think needed a bit more work was Sarah. She seemed a bit flat and inconsequential. Although she was a minor character, I think she could have been developed a bit more even if we don’t ever see her (she just kind of appears and disappears from the plot). While I realize this is probably complete, I do wish that something could be done to save Willy – I guess I’m just a sucker for happy endings. (Perhaps a sequel: hope)
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  • From ANON - Jillian Buck on June 29, 2007
    ...wow, I'm not even sure what to say. This is hardly my first time reading this marvelous story of yours, but it is the first time I've managed to remember to leave a review. :] It hurts to read this story, it does. And re-reading it... oh, it's even more deliciously painful the second time around, now that I know the cause of all of Wonka's pain.

    It was wonderfully thought out, and I applaud you for that. The ending is tragic, and the fluffy side of me wants you to write a sequel, with the both of them somehow achieving that happy ending, but another part of me just loves this one. It seems fitting, somehow, with a finality that irritates me beyond belief, and yet I love it all the same. Keep up the brilliant work!
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  • From on June 21, 2007
    that was sooo wonderfully misrable the second time.

    i belive you should rewrite the ending make it happy

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  • From AdenDiction on June 18, 2007
    Oh my GOD, that's SAD!!!! *clutches heart* Beautifully written, really it was...but oh so terribly sad...so sad. I want with all my might to hug Willy...and hit Charly in the back of the head.

    What an adventure it would be to send Charly after willy in the other boat...to bring him back...but...your story, not mine.

    Devinely sorrowfull.

    Never Stop Writing.

    ~Aden Diction
    -!-Addiction-!-
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  • From on May 06, 2007
    it made my soul bleed it was so good!!!!

    (oops* i have no soul :-)
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  • From ANON - Lawr on November 25, 2006
    This story needs another chapter... And a happy ending... *sob* It's so sad. Please say you'll make it end well (and possibly r-rated :P) Mail me if you ever update?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2006
    Oh my god...I'm going to cry willy can't die...please write more...pleaseeeeeeeee :(
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  • From ANON - Fallen on August 19, 2006
    OMG that was great but sad please tell me theres a way o save willy still?
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  • From ANON - Qiu on August 18, 2006
    omg... this story is unbelievable. i cried at the end. very, very, touching. i love it.
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  • From ANON - Kris on August 14, 2006
    OMG...that was so sad I cried :(
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  • From ANON - Emerald*Dragon on August 13, 2006
    Eep. Just had to stop it there didn't you? =P Please write more!
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