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Reviews for Mr. and Mrs. Darcy

By : ticklemepink
  • From knappshari on November 19, 2009
    Oh, Bravo!!!! *thunderous ovation*

    May I ask who your inspiration for Darcy was??

    Your imagination? Colin Firth? Matthew McFadden?

    *fans self vigorously* Holy Cow, any one of those and you have it made...
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  • From ANON - Miss Windfield on February 23, 2009
    The story is well writen. I have to agree, though, that some inaccuracies have been made. Nothing too serious. First, the mention of the undergarment mistake, wich has already been highlighted. And then, the intercourse in itself. The mention of 'fingers' (noun, plural) being inserted in a virgin's vagina, without breaking the hymen, and then the later being riped by Mr. Darcy's penis is a bit hard to believe. Jane Austen's description of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy implies that he is a rather tall man. Proportionally, his fingers should be longer and thicker than a more average-heighted man. To put two fingers and jam them would most assuredly rip the hymen, at least partially. However, it is a fictional story and, as such, not so disturbing. These reflexions apart, it was a rather sweet story.
    Miss Windfield.
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  • From PsychoKitty on June 22, 2008
    That was so wonderful and so sweet! You did such a fantastic job. I would love to see more P&P from you! Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From ANON - Faerie In Combat Boots on June 01, 2008
    Very well written I must say. One thing bothered me however. You wrote that first he removed her pantaloons and then later on, you wrote that she was left on in her underwear (and I assume you meant panties. Well, in the Regency period her pantaloons would have been the undergarment closest to her skin (if worn at all), they didn't have panties during that time period. Just a little historical inaccuracy. Other than that the story is wonderful.
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  • From Utopia on April 03, 2008
    Beautiful, simply beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on March 16, 2008
    I loved it! Wonderfully, tastefully written! It made me sigh with delight and I wished i could be her...
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  • From Rosamund on February 08, 2008
    AWWW!!! One of my all time favorite couples! Write another ;)
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  • From aquamum on September 05, 2007
    I love D&E HMS = thankyou
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