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Reviews for Bittersweet Hurt

By : Minervaone
  • From bloodravyn on December 09, 2010
    nooo!!!
    why'd she have to ruin it all?!
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  • From trulygreat on May 03, 2010
    I assume as it has been a couple years that you aren't going to continue this story - UGH! This was so compelling! I wasn't even sure until the last minute that you were going to bring in Esme.

    But - you have to help Edward! You just can't leave him in that unendurable agony (Or is that just me?)
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  • From AKissCouldKill on April 24, 2009
    :/ are you going to continue with this story?
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  • From Tourette on February 04, 2009
    Please please update this story! I really love it!!!!!!!!!
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  • From audioscience on January 14, 2009
    this story is so painful to read, but oh so good!
    pleasee update soon! i need to find out whats going to happen!!

    ps. do you know of anyway to get an email alert for when you update this story?
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  • From KittyTheCookie on November 30, 2008
    AHH!!! HURRY UP WITH THOSE LAST CHAPTERS! Is there more smut? I WANT SMUT. Okay, I'll shut it. Love the story. this pairing is AWESOME..especially with the release of the movie..and that lovely questionable scene where Carlisle bit Edward...I SO twisted that in my head. Mmm..tasty! Yay!
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  • From chervil on November 25, 2008
    Oh, you simply cannot leave us hanging like this! I'd never imagined Carlisle and Edward in a romantic context before, but your story proved that it is very much possible. :) Your first post mentioned a planned 12 chapters -- so only four more to go! Please, please, please update!

    I am anxiously awaiting. :)
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  • From ladybluepeach on November 10, 2008
    Wow, beautiful..I am in tears..It's so bittersweet..well it was sweet at the beginning...This sounds like my shitty love life so I can really connect witht he story. I hope there is a good outcome..I'm a hopeless romantic and I would hate for Edward to be left hurt...To hell with Charliel..mmmOk out of this whole babble you should know I like the story cand cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From AKissCouldKill on October 12, 2008
    >:{ You haven't updated in forever. I'm getting really anxious to find out what Edward does!!
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  • From lordoberon on September 12, 2008
    Review for chapter 8 -

    I love this fic so much! It's awesome! I really feel the sorrow that both of them are feeling; Carlisle's insistence on some distance, and Edward's need to be needed. It's so heartbreaking. I have tears in my eyes!

    And now Esme is in the picture. wow. I can't wait to see waht happens next! Please continue! Your description of their reuniting, and their distancing...is so touching and moving. You write so well.

    I can't wait to see more.
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  • From faithkry on September 12, 2008
    OMG I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!! You are such a great writer. Please come out with the next chapers soon. :)
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  • From lordoberon on September 12, 2008
    The way you write this...is so amazing. It feels so real. It feels like I am living out Carlisle's story, maybe even Edward's story, even though I don't find this pairing canonical.

    The way you have introduced Esme is very smoothly and works very well. I feel both their pains. I love how Edward played p iano before he was vampire in this story. It makes sense. Why must Edward be good at everything just because he is vampire? Thus, I like the idea that he was excellent at piano before even being vampire.

    And the concept that playing it, the music, makes th eothers' thoughts drift away. That is very suitable, that he would want to drown them out and not hear them, and it makes sense that music would do the trick.

    Your fanfic is very ratioinal and well thought out, in a way I have never read any othe Twilight fanfic to be. It makes SENSE, in so many ways. It doesn't feel like a fanfic.

    You're blowing my mind here. Excellent job! I love this! And your words are very poignantly phrased.
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  • From lordoberon on September 11, 2008
    Review for chapter 3 -

    Holy cramoly! This is INTENSE!!! I love it. :D You are a genius! I'm hooked.
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  • From lordoberon on September 11, 2008
    First chapter review -

    I love it!!!!!!!!! Your descriptions of human Edward are so beautiful. I love the sweet scene you portray here, and I uinderstand Carlisle's sentimentality and fascination with Edward.

    Fantastic beginning! And this is from someone who doesn't normally read Carlisle/Edward. :D
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  • From LouisElegantRequiem on September 03, 2008
    Oh, my... I almost cried... this is really an amazing story, please keep it up!
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