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Reviews for The Last Night

By : RosaTenebrum
  • From ANON - Darkhymns on March 07, 2015
    After all these years, I still love these two. Unhealthy co-dependence mixed with some manipulation, and still some love there that doesn't fix all the hurt they have. This fic coincides so well with the books and their relationship. Raistlin can only show some form of love through the pain he inflicts, and Caramon is desperate for anything at all.

    Also:

    "You can't do this. Not to me."
    "I can do anything to you."

    That sums it all up perfectly.
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  • From ANON - Lyz on March 07, 2015
    Best Raistlin/Caramon story I've ever read. Beautiful!
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  • From ANON - Rousy_P on January 24, 2009
    "of that he he was absolutely certain" --> "of that he was absolutely certain"
    "the salty flavour of Raistlin's tears" --> "the salty flaVOR of Raistlin's tears" (BritE vs AE)
    And I'm not sure about these, but:
    "he would lay himself down to sleep" --> "he would LIE himself down to sleep"
    "he would go to Raistlin on his knees and lay his head down on" --> "and LIE his head down on"
    (LAY DOWN = set aside, abandon LIE DOWN= place/position) (would + infinitive)/ vs LAY (put down)

    You see, I'm not so sure about the lie-lay-lain/lay-laid-laid thing. English is not my first language (same as you), but some things look funny to me when I read them, and I know that many natives mix those two verbs up. However, I've also noticed Americans use it differently from Brits, and I'm more used to British English. If I'm wrong and you used them with that meaning intended, please ignore this part!!

    As for the fic, same as always: incredible!! I think that's one of my favourite parts (the "Look Raist, bunnies" part), so thanks for making it even more special, even if it's with a bitter twist. It's even better because we got both of the twins' POV, and not only one of them, so this is a study on contrasts. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - L.T. on June 03, 2008
    Wow... I'm wordless. Quite shocking... but so beautiful...
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