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Reviews for Everything She Always Wanted

By : tr0ubLe
  • From Pegleg-TinStar on April 03, 2021

    Good, solidly good.  Well written, well edited. Not sure Edward would have given in quite so easily, but it is nice to see Bela trying to assert herself in their relationship, something Meyers didn’t do much of in the series. I don’t know how to say this, but I feel like the story is lacking in the heat and passion of a first love affair, I just didn’t feel the excitement, the tension, and the release that the characters should have been feeling.  Keep at it, way better than most!


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  • From karencullen2007 on April 09, 2013
    Interesting...keep it going!
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  • From VanessaWolfe on February 13, 2010
    I really liked it! I hope you do decide to keep it going.
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  • From ANON - mikey on August 01, 2009
    yes it is about time! lol i love it i think you should keep it going not realy retell breaking dawn but mabye put a few more of thes fun nights in were they should be and after hmm? and ofcourse fill in the blanks miss stephy left us
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  • From Renee1985 on March 15, 2009
    yes, keep going it is so good so far.
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  • From MrsJasperHale on February 16, 2009
    i'm not going to lie: i liked it a lot.
    but my only problems were
    1. she says that she didn't want to cuddle up to edward after sex because it was too hot. vampires are ice blocks.
    2. they don't sweat

    unless this is an a/h and i've totally missed my mark.
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  • From insatiable06 on December 26, 2008
    You've got to keep going! Does she wear his ring? Keep going, I love everyones take on the stories. :-)
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  • From ANON - Ru-Doragon on November 23, 2008
    -serious- Keep going. This is good. I like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. ^_~
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on November 10, 2008
    Eh not what i would expect, I would think she would atleast ask him about sex or not. I havent read the last two books or not so yeah I donno if they discuss sex in the book...Probably not... Lol X.x I hope so though.
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  • From lordoberon on September 12, 2008
    oh, god! This is a great idea! I remember wishing they'd gone further when I read that part of "Eclipse", too! hahaha. Can't wait to read more...
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  • From whitefrost on September 04, 2008
    It has potential, but for a first time, there was no build up and it feels like the scene was really rushed.
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  • From DisabledCloudFlyer on August 13, 2008
    I like the idea of what if but I hate that you made Edawrd whore hiself out that way in order to get an agreement. Does that make sense? --I feel very contradictory.
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  • From ANON - Tare on August 09, 2008
    you captured Bella and Edwards characteristics and chemistry very well.

    my only issue? vampires do not breathe.
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  • From ANON - Slinky on July 29, 2008
    Some of the parts of the story seemed familiar but apart from that. It was good. Are you completed with this story? Because if not, update soon.
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on July 22, 2008
    Please keep going! I'm enjoying it muchly!
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