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Reviews for Drowning

By : MandiMorbid
  • From LadyNocturneJuliet on April 09, 2011
    This is one of my favorite stories here. You did an amazing job! I love your writing.
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  • From melissa29 on January 23, 2011
    I have enjoyed this chapter. I hope u write more to this story soon.

    Melissa
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  • From Raisden on July 04, 2008
    I can't believe this story has so few hits and no comments! I *loved* it! I adore the Vampire Academy series, and this story just blew me away! Your characters were dead on. This seriously seemed like a missing scene from one of the books! It was sexy, hot, and realistic all at the same time. Kudos to Rose for finally landing Dimitri! Also, nice touch with Lissa's dream and all. It set the tone for the story and made it that much easier to believe.

    Alas, amidst all this praise, I do have one bit of criticism. The song lyrics or whatever they were sort of clashed with the rest of the story. Perhaps you could edit the story and set the lyrics in italics or use asteriks to set them apart from all the *ahem* action? They kind of messed up the flow.

    Other than that, great job! I look forward to reading your other stories, and I can't wait to see more from you!

    xoxoRaisden
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