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Reviews for Playing Dirty is mean...

By : JaceDamian23
  • From ANON - Suki on June 29, 2009
    creative.
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  • From MidnightRain on April 27, 2009
    Idea is good.

    You could work on your grammar and general... wording.

    There were many, many mistakes and you used the wrong words in places.

    Consider finding someone to review your work before publishing it.
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on April 25, 2009
    First I apologize for not being signed in. This story was so cute, and quite clever. I really enjoyed it. I've absolutely no idea why it only has three stars. Do NOT let that get you down. I'd actually love to see more with this, even though its a cute short standalone piece. Very clever idea mixing the blood and chocolate. Hope to see more from this and you soon.

    Tyger x
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  • From LouisElegantRequiem on July 25, 2008
    XD XD XD
    Oh, man, that was hilarious! Good job!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on July 07, 2008
    I loved this...such a good twist LOL...Poor Emmett!
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  • From luvhp on July 01, 2008
    Cute story, a couple of grammatical errors, I can overlook those for a fun story like this!!!
    I'm glad Bella won :)
    So, uh...does it end there, or does he, doesn'the??? Guess we'll find out!
    Off to check out the next chapter of New Moon (I'm so far behind)

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  • From ANON - salenkaiba on June 30, 2008
    hey!

    soooo cool! :-) I loved it.
    are you going to write a sequel? it could be fun .. maybe another bet between Bella and the vampires?
    I think you have lots of imagination. you should make a serie about it. More ;-)
    see ya soon!
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