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Reviews for Wake Up Screaming

By : RAG90
  • From siilentpanda on May 12, 2009
    HaHa I finally got in, this has taken way too much effort just to leave a review. I better be appreciated lol. I have to say I don't normally like OCs but I am curious to see where this one will go, and as for his lover deffinatly a wizard/loc. I mean if he is weak against magic then if he is dating his own then they are kinda easier to kill lol, besides it will make a fun blend of chars in the story especially if jacob becomes his friend. well thats my pov atleast.
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on December 28, 2008
    A brilliant second chapter (not all great things are lengthy) LIKE ALICE!!!! Thank you for clearing up the weakness thing. And i really hope i didn't sound harsh because i do really love this story. as for who he ends up with its so hard to chose but i would almost want to say nymph just because i love the creatures to pieces but i have to say vampire because its the one bloodline that will doesn't have him so it might be interesting to if you tie in any abnormal side affects when they have sex
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on December 26, 2008
    very intriguing story i must admit. Just a little constructive criticism though are you going to have will vulnerable to anything? Even the Vampires for all their strengths are able to be destroyed by fire and wolves. and pretty much you have given him power of both. No of offense intended but stories are just not enjoyable if a character is able wipe everything by with a swipe of the hand. But I'm sure you have already though of that since in all of your other stories i have read you have always givent he characters weaknesses. I was just curious anyway great job and i'll look forward to seeing the future chapter ^_^
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