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Reviews for Falling Star

By : championoflit
  • From RogueMudblood on May 19, 2012

    Well done! I could really feel the chase, the adrenaline flowing through Bella throughout this scene.

    I have to admit curiosity as to where Edward is. The way Bella speaks of him, in the past tense... I'm intrigued.

    Should you choose to return to this piece, I think you have an interesting plot here.

    Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!
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  • From DungeonButterfly on January 10, 2009
    Ooo! Please write more! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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