Adult-FanFiction.org : Books

Reviews for Trust Me

By : MrsJasperHale

From Louisvuittonfreak on April 26, 2012
Wth.....sorry but that is way to soon for sex, let's be serious. I would be like he'll noooooo...
Report Review
From FlnFroggie on February 20, 2009
That was HOT!!! I really love that story and I can't wait to read more.
Report Review
From opalwebb on February 02, 2009
Thank you for finishing; although I am sad that it had to end. I look forward to reading more of your fics. Also, thank your boyfriend for me. I think that he did a wonderful job typing!!! Hopefully he is as Cullen-crazy (or in the "Twilight" Zone) as the rest of us and desn't think we are all just plain crazy. :)

BTW...I finished New Moon yesterday. I didn't I could read that fast, but it was also so good. I'm looking for Eclipse next.

I agree with the rest of them...I think you are a goddess of the written twilight word. Keep up the good work!!!!

I hope you heal soon, but look at it this way....at least it gives your brain time to think of more juicy and wonderful things to write for Edward and Bella!!! ALSO....Congrats on your job promotion!!!

Look forward to reading more of your stories sometime in the future. Get well soon! As always....your devoted reader.

Report Review
From MrsJasperHale on February 02, 2009
^^Continued from above ^^

Also, thanks for saying I'm funny. Much appreciation! Oh you people are so kind. You are all SAINTS!!! Your positive comment have kept me in high spirits.

I better go as my boyfriend is threatening to stop typing.
Grrrrrrr.

~MrsJasperHale
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Report Review
From MrsJasperHale on February 02, 2009
Hey guys thank you for all of your reviews and as I have said before I would love to keep writing but I am suffering some serious wrist issues atm (one is broken, the other sprained) and I have perfected the art of typing with a pen in my mouth for when my bf is at work (It's hard to hold down the shift key and another key at the same time, so I've perfected the art of having two pens in my mouth and kind of manoevering them around eachother. Very tricky and painful in the tongue department)...

Anyway in reply to
1. Will I include Rosalie's fate?
The answer is: YES!!! (that is an exclamation of excitement and not annoyance, btw) I totally plan to include Rosalie's story in my next follow-up fanfic which I will write as soon as I have healed (which I don't know about times so PLEASE be patient)

2. I Want More of Edwards POV!
Me too! I will try to write a few more chapters into my new fanfic which I have been planning for a little while *yippee*.

Oh and thank you for referring to me as your Goddess... because that's the nicest thing a stranger as said to me apart from a creepy old guy in a lift who tried to stick his hand up my skirt and said "You've got nice buns. You work out?"
^^ being called a 'Goddess' is much nicer. Thank you SOOOO much!

On a more personal note... my healing process... it may be delayed... because not only am I broken in a very Bella-ish way (I take no offense, I pride myself in my clutz-ability), my healing is delayed because I also have juvenile rheumatoid arthritis (which is, coincidentally, the exact same illness that Peter Facinelli - or Carlisle Cullens - daughter suffers in real life)
Report Review
From bassment on February 01, 2009
Please write a sequel!! ><
What a great story, I totally enjoyed myself reading it =)
I also liked that you included Edward's POV though I wish there was more of it!
I hope you won't get too busy to write!
Report Review
From InfernalParadise on February 01, 2009
Oh, and now that I've read the other reviews, I nod to the question opalwebb has raised before me: Will you ever let us find out what Rosalie wanted to tell Bella (Chapter 6: Forgiven)?? If not, shall I fake a nervous breakdown and blackmail you like that until you do tell us?? Hehe. ;)

Oh... no, mustn't threaten my Goddness. *asks for forgiveness* o_O

Report Review
From InfernalParadise on February 01, 2009
My Goddess, here I kneel before you in awe, shedding thousands of tears as this lovely story has ended by now. Must reread. I'm afraid you got me a bit too addicted to your wonderful ideas and writing style. *sigh*

Oh, and your bf did a good job on typing the last chapter, especially considering the fact that "he is... well... a male". *lol* God, you're too funny! I'm just waiting until you do a story and have Edward jumping around in a bunny costume delivering easter eggs because he's, well, male. Hehe. You could do it all and I'd believe every single written word. ;P
Report Review
From on January 31, 2009
Excellent chapter! Very romantic! Can't wait for the next!
ReddTwilight
Report Review
From opalwebb on January 31, 2009
Another great chapter. I love this story!!! Not only was it Hot, it was also sweet.

I'm courious to find out if Rosalie ever gets to tell Bella what she wanted to say in the Forgiven chapter.
I'm only reading New Moon at the moment and cried all through the chapters after the birthday party. I've read enough on the internet to find out that Edward and Bella will get back together, so I guess I'll be alright. So.....to get back to the point I was trying to make....it would be nice if somehow Bella's first experience with Edward sexually somehow brings Rosalie and Bella closer together. Just waiting in anticipation to find out where you were heading with that in your fic.

Love your story. I hope your wrists get better soon!!! I will wait patiently for the next chapter and be very understanding. You are a little like Bella (and please don't take offense) by being just a little clutzy. If it is any consalation, I'm a bit that way too.

Keep up the good work!!!!
Report Review
From MrsJasperHale on January 30, 2009
you guys are too nice to me and my work lol ; )
thank you so much though I have been trying to keep it as un-fairytaleish as possible and closer to reality.
it's good to see that is has paid off and you all seem to be enjoying it!
yes writing that lemon was hard work as I had my boss looking over my shoulder all day and my boyfriend looking over my shoulder all night. evils. lol you have to give kudos to a boyfriend who doesn't make too much of a fuss when you keep them awake all night typing away noisily in bed next to them! if he is reading this that I'M SORRY and I LOVE YOU and I also owe you one when I get this thing finished ;o

at the moment i am actually in a bit of a trifle (yes, a dessert), because i tripped over and sprained one of my wrists and severely bruised the other so typing is painful and slow. i am usually a speedy touch-typist and I have been reduced to two-fingered tapping! it's so slow!

But I am still tapping away single-fingeredly to finish chapter 8, the last chapter in Edward's POV so wish me luck and I will have it up ASAP!

~MrsJasperHale
Report Review
From InfernalParadise on January 29, 2009
Shame on me as I've read all chapters of it so far without ever reviewing. +_+ The thing is just that I don't want to come up with the usual "great, awesome, brilliant, hot, etc.". Unfortunately, however, my brain's little cells are too delighted and happy about chapter 7 so I'm rather uncreative there... hehe. Sorry. ;)

What fascinates me most is that whenever I (re-)read your story, it truly feels as if it's real... as if Edward and Bella were actually speaking and doing all of this. A lot of other styles make it rather seem as if Edward were on too much Valium and Bella were missing that very Valium since he already took it all. ;) Yours doesn't. Yours is just wonderful. In a really, really good way. Which is really, really good. Which, uhm, shows that my brain cells are really, really dancing happily and brainlessly around because of "Trust me". *lol*
Report Review
From DarkKaoru on January 29, 2009
Ufff.. so goooood! That was real hot. And I hope its not the final chapter, this fic is too frickin' good!
Report Review
From on January 29, 2009
WOW, that was amazing! OMG, please let there be another chapter coming up! LOVED IT!!!
Great job!!

ReddTwilight
~*~*~*~*~*
Report Review
From DarkKaoru on January 29, 2009
Ohhh, I almost forgot... THANK YOU FOR DOING IT ON EDWARD'S POV, I was actually just saying it with the hope that you already wrote it as an EPOV, I didn't even knew it wasn't even done. So the fact that you actually wrote it after that made me shed 2 tears! (Yeah, I count them...).

I'm so grateful that you did it that way and you totally nailed it, you did it better than I thought. It was very angsty and emotional, with the self-loathing and shame! it was really good. Keep it up!
Report Review