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Reviews for Ax the Prostitute

By : musicman88
  • From Ladylala04 on August 07, 2011
    Hello, I'm not sure if you even use this anymore, but Ijust wanted to say this story is wonderful!! The whole approach to an alien experiencing and enjoying sex was great. I loved the characterizations of the Animorphs were awesome and the story was truly original. I loved loved loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - duelpersonality on April 18, 2010
    This story is... interesting. While the narrative feels stilted and not terribly sexy, I have to think that if Ax had really done these things, your story is exactly how his report would read. At least your grammar and spelling tend to be quite good. I just wanted to offer my opinion that Ax would know exactly what the date is in the Andalite calendar, if not by using his internal clock then by adding time to the date of the Dome Ship's crash. I also wanted to mention that in the Hork Bajir Chronicles book, the Andalite date is given alongside the human and Yeerk calendars, making it not-terribly-difficult to determine what the Andalite date would be during your story. If you'd like, I could send you the probable Andalite date for you to use at the beginning of each chapter. Unless, of course, the fact that Ax doesn't know the Andalite date has some bearing in later chapters of the story

    ~ duelpersonality
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