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Reviews for Destiny Awaits

By : Lollydolly
  • From Miltherien on July 25, 2009
    more more more!!!!!
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  • From TheGlowMaster on July 25, 2009
    Thank you! What a cute ending! So sweet! SQUEEEEEEEE xD TY
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  • From SpearsTwlight on July 24, 2009
    Wow finali an update! Will bella get preg . Or becum a vamp?
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  • From pinsxvxneedles on July 24, 2009
    nice nice nice. :]] i'm so happy! :D i check daily like a loser and i was jonesin. :]
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  • From emmibubbles07 on July 24, 2009
    Loved it! So glad for the update! Can't wait for the next one!! =]
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  • From fairietayle on July 20, 2009
    I'm totally in love with your story! The way you've written this is - if possible - even more captivating than Twilight was.
    I love the plot. It flows effortlessly with it's own pace - no rushing needed. You took care of different plottwists (Alice leaving, Jasper and Bella growing closer, breakup with Edward, Victoria and Laurent...) cleanly and believably. You hold the reigns tightly to you and always remember to clear the issues you've left open earlier, like the tiny tiger. And then there are the issues the book has left open, like Victoria. I didn't even remember her existence until you brought her up and I'm so glad that you took care of her too and cleared that up. And the Denali's. You didn't have to bring them into the story but I'm glad that you did :D
    And the characters :D I love Jasper most of all and you've written him beautifully ;) Bella is totally herself and I love how you twisted all the annoying parts of Edward to be too much instead of cute. You also give the other characters more dimension. They seem more like people than just characters filling up the blanks. I love how comical Emmett is - the prank wars between him and Bella and his protectiveness of her; how Bella has found an even ground and a true sister of Rosalie; and the fascination the vampires have with Bella eating and cooking her food. But most of all I love how they seem like a real family :) It's totally heart-warming. And Georg-the-jewelry-shop-owner is the best!
    And then there are the little details. More than I can count one single sentence in a chapter has melted me completely.
    But there's more to this story than just the logical of how things should go. Under every word, under every sentence, there's this strong current of emotion that makes this tory more than just pretty words. The feelings that the characters feel seem so real to me because I can feel them too as I read them. It's totally amazing. I can't count the times this story has gotten me to sgueel or go 'awww' :D
    You have serious skill, girl. I hope you never stop writing :)
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  • From AnastasiaBeaverhausen on July 18, 2009
    Please please please please please please please update soon! The suspense is killing me! I can't wait to see what Jasper plans for their first official date, how the swan and tiger break, the return of lame Edward, etc. This story is soooooo good and I really hope you can find the inspiration and time to keep it going. It is wonderful!
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  • From pinsxvxneedles on July 17, 2009
    :[[ i don't understand what is taking so long.
    i hope it's only because you're working on learning to breathe (which is amazing) and that you're not tired of writing this story. :/

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  • From Sekhmet on July 11, 2009
    Yay!!!! I effing love this story!!! And can there be some sexy smut now please? Pretty please? With cherries sex on top? : )
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  • From bellaxjasperxplease on July 09, 2009
    This story is bookmarked. I check EVERYDAY to see if there is a new chapter. AHH!!! I can't wait for the NEXT chapter!!!
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  • From spotted3star on July 03, 2009
    wonderful! but continue writing, your killen me here O:
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  • From Recordkeeper on July 02, 2009
    great chapter. I love this story so much. im totally baffled by the tiger and the swan thing. what exactly is on time anyways? do you have a schedule?
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  • From SpearsTwlight on July 02, 2009
    Lmao . Cockblocking! Thanx 4 the update!
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  • From Roseann1013 on July 02, 2009
    Squeal! I was so worried. I was about to call in a search party! When I saw this chapter it was like letting a breath go I didnt relize I was holding.
    PLEASE for my sanity, not so long between updates...i mean I know you have a life and you cant spend every waking moment writing a story...but ask your self this....What would Jesus do....

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  • From Miltherien on July 02, 2009
    i need some smut!!! when will it happen?? good writing!
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