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Reviews for Fire And Ice

By : AeraVale
  • From VanessaWolfe on March 01, 2010
    Wonderful! You know them so well. I would love to read more from you.
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  • From LadyExcalibur on December 17, 2009
    I think you did a wonderful job of portraying these characters. It's not always well done, but this was beautiful! Felt very much like it could have actually been in Eclipse. Lovely!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2009
    Just pointing out a spelling error :) You accidentally called Alice "Alive" instead in the second chapter.
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  • From Fizzle21 on December 07, 2009
    Really really enjoyed this, I think you very successfully captured Jacob's thoughts during this interaction. I tell you what, it'd be awesome to see the same scene from Edward's perspective, what you think?? ;-) and the idea about what Bella says when sleep talking would be genius!
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  • From ANON - Tim on December 01, 2009
    This was very well written. I'm not gonna lie, i would love it of you did the whole book like this :)
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  • From ANON - helese on September 08, 2009
    I just found this story and just wanted to let you know it's great. I've only read the first part so far but I couldn't wait to let you know how much I love it. You've kept true to the characters and the scene and I appreciate it.

    Thanks for sharing,
    H
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  • From ANON - tara on July 03, 2009
    I really liked the way this tied in with the book, it made a lot of sense. I would really have loved to have heard what Bella had said during her sleep talking that night, or any other conversations Jacob and Edward had while she was sleeping- that would have been interesting.
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  • From InfernalParadise on May 31, 2009
    I’ve already read a few tent versions, but this one was the best by far. You managed to capture everyone’s feelings and worries so well which is quite some task when it comes to moments between Edward and Jacob. And is it just me, or did it actually get hotter in this tent? ;)
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  • From ANON - emeraldfire on May 25, 2009
    Beautifully written!
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  • From DeeLish on May 24, 2009
    Another well written continuation of the conversation, very very good. I am enjoying this story very much, it's awesome. I hope we'll be seeing some smut soon...prehaps?

    Keep it up!

    DeeLish xx
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  • From DeeLish on May 22, 2009
    I like this story very much. I love the interaction between Edward and Jacob, you seem to have their characters down to a tee, and the conversation between these two 'enemies' flowed very well.

    Please add some more soon, i can't wait too long!

    DeeLish xx
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