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Reviews for Sea, Foam and Dust

By : Hnoss
  • From ANON - Tahn on August 22, 2014
    Please please keep writing this. I wanna know what happens.
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  • From on September 22, 2011
    please keep writing this story...i'm desperate to find out what happens next. it's a beautiful story so far...i would really love to see where it goes...please and thank you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - adam nash on November 04, 2010
    Aaaah! where's the rest of the story?!
    So beautifully written. So seductive and magical i couldn't stop! i dearly hope to read the rest. To find out what happens next to Coeur, to see his next encounter with prince Andrew, to find out what his malicious older brother and his father have in store.
    I'm in love with this story, and would love to illustrate it...
    How amazing. Please feel free to contact me at tigernash@hotmail.com and keep me informed on this story's progression.

    Adam C. Nash
    Mt Eliza, Victoria, Australia.
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  • From ANON - sara on October 15, 2010
    although this is pretty much the little mermaid, i like it alot. i think its cute but more detail and storyline would make it better. i like how this is pretty much disney gone gay lol
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  • From hawthorne on September 14, 2010
    oooh please keep writing this story... I keep checkin back for more!
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  • From ANON - Lucia on August 18, 2010
    This story is really interesting! I love that it's sort of a genderbent version of The Little Mermaid with a few twists here and there. :) Very nice, my dear! I hope you continue with this story. From the way you've described the characters, I really like their designs! It makes me itch to draw them. ;) (If I end up doing so, I'll be sure to post back here with a link. :) )
    Never stop writing, you're a wonderful storyteller!
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  • From sidvicious on June 13, 2010
    look i will not, i repeat will not be another besotted reader who debases themselves in the hope that you will update SOON... however pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee finish BEAST,the narnia fairy tale and this!!!!!
    you are without doubt the first author who just doesn't suck when revamping fairy tales or doing what A Rice did with sleeping beauty. shiit i went on a tangent, basically you rock u fairy tale god so get writing! NOW!!
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on October 06, 2009
    I'm actually fangirling the Sea-Witch...Warlock. I hope you finish the story. I laughed aloud at the very end of Chapter Three.
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  • From zombiebait86 on September 06, 2009
    ....A rock......**face palm*
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  • From ANON - kristina on September 01, 2009
    I really like this story, I cant believe it hasn't gotten any other reviews yet! You should post this in Y Gallery, I think it gets more traffic than this website, and they actually have a section for fairy tale spinoffs called Cracked Fairy Tales. Hope you write more!
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