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Reviews for Victory Celebration

By : Lome
  • From ANON - Tylar on September 24, 2009
    Please update this story. I really would like to see how it unfolds.
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  • From goldiducks on September 12, 2009
    excellently written! i hope you continue this one :)
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  • From rangeraine on August 25, 2009
    Wow. I'm not usually a Twilight reader, and Jacob is one of my favorite characters, but this story was awesome. Simple and primal. Poor Bella. I wish we could have learned just what edward did. I loved the emotion you portrayed. It is exactly how I see them reacting. Edward especially. Of course pfft, we know Jake would never, ever harm her, but hell, this was one hell of an AU. Especially since his mind viewed it all as concentual. It actually held a bit of truth from the books. You know, how he kept thinking she wanted him whenever he kissed her.

    *grins* Great job. Great job.

    Sam
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  • From InfernalParadise on July 29, 2009
    I already thought chapter 1 was great, so now I'm desperately looking for the right word for chapter 2. You managed to switch between all those different views and moments so well that I caught myself holding my breath quite a few times. Really, really amazing. And while there was little to smile about in this (for obvious reasons), I still had to grin at the line about those poor receptionists who'll probably need some therapy afterwards... ;)
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  • From ANON - Cindi Miller on July 22, 2009
    I really like it. You did a great job describing things, and wonderful with keeping the characters true. I also love your 'about you' in your author info. I agree with you..... there is something about rape stories that I like.
    You have a great writing talent.
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  • From FakeYoueDeathMS on July 22, 2009
    write a chapter 3? Please?


    andd I read your profile and you should email me sometime. I also have a way crazy rape kink :D
    lost_and_broken_101@hotmail.com (it's also my msn and my yahoo if you're wondering)
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  • From ANON - Suki on July 21, 2009
    Thank You so much for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    please update the third chapter quickly as well.
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  • From bubbleskami on July 20, 2009
    Aww! That's so sad but really good! I like this, I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Melody on July 20, 2009
    Hey, great job-this is really good! I want to see what happens next! Poor Bella... Please update!!!
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  • From InfernalParadise on July 19, 2009
    Tough material (which is exactly to my liking) and very promising for future chapters. Alright, perhaps not that promising for Jacob who will by now have all of the Cullens hunting him, but could I care any less? Hehe. It's his own fault... ;)
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  • From FakeYoueDeathMS on July 19, 2009
    :O
    Wow.
    That's intense, and really good. chapter 2?
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  • From ANON - DreamWritter on July 18, 2009
    This is a very good start to what i hope will be a great story. I hope that you continue this:too many good writters have left good stories unfinished; which is a shame for everyone.

    Hope to read more from you soon.

    XXXX
    DreamWritter
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  • From ANON - Kristen_Stewart_is_Mine on July 18, 2009
    this is not a celebration, it is a time of mourning.

    I want to see how the others will react.

    So, Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - TB on July 18, 2009
    Hey
    Just like you to know that i like your story, but it might be a good idea to think about it a little more and put some more detail in it. I know that you need to grow as a writer when you write but this story has so much potential you have such a fantastic start!
    keep on the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Renae on July 18, 2009
    CHAPTER 2! CHAPTER 2! CHAPTER 2! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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