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Reviews for Dusk: A Twilight Re-Write

By : AlphaOmegaPsi
  • From ANON - chesterzerousygirl on July 29, 2009
    Ok, I'll bite. I thought it was good. Though I do wish there was like a 'story-alert' button here somewhere. oh well. so, when does she meet Edward.
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  • From InfernalParadise on July 29, 2009
    Honestly, I can very well understand what you mean. I wasn't too happy with all of Twilight, either (didn't hate it, though) but I definitely admire your will to actually rewrite it. That's gonna be a lot. ;)
    I like your choice of words immensely so far. After I read those first few lines, you kinda had me hooked to it. It's rather impressing to read. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Renae on July 28, 2009
    Great start. I can't wait to have a non-whiney Bella!!! And while you're at it can we have a hot Bella/Jake scene after asshole leaves!!! PLEASE!!! lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2009
    I also did not like Twilight. So far, this seems an improvement. :)
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