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Reviews for A Little More, A Little Less

By : Starryeyedstar
  • From lordoberon on December 04, 2009
    I loved the second part! yes and yes again! very hot. great pairing. I shall check out your ff.net "Jakeward" *snicker* fanfics.

    Edward saying "babe" sent me into laughing, I must say. I just can't see it. But the way you write Seth and Jasper is great. I especially like how Jasper is influenced by feeling Seth's feelings.


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  • From lordoberon on December 04, 2009
    Haha, a two-shot! awesome!

    very hot part 1. interesting pairing. different! I like it. People forget about these two a lot, it's a shame.

    on to part 2...
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  • From lavender666 on September 05, 2009
    Wow...ya'know, I'm not really into Twilight, I love vampires and anything that's paranormal, but I couldn't get into Twilight. However, the slash pairings kick ass! This fic and pairing are very interesting. Great job
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  • From MiriuOniaya on September 02, 2009
    I went to peek in the M/M section of Twilight, since I like to keep an eye on the three fics in it (mine included), and what did I see?! Another two fics, yours being one! For a moment I thought I was in the wrong section, lol. Jasper/Seth? I haven't even read the story, but that alone sounds hot!

    Wow, I forgot how young Seth is. I'm like; 'why aren't they having hot man/boy sex?!' And then I was like; 'Oh yeah, he is kind of, er, young.' Jasper is being such a good guy, not taking advantage of young, sweet Seth. I about choked on a snort when I read that Jacob had imprinted on Edward. I didn't see that coming; not that I'm not a fan. They could be delicious too.

    "Well, my boyfriend is a mind reader." That was awesome! Totally made me laugh. I can hear Jacob saying that in a teasing matter-of-fact voice. When I first started reading I didn't know what to expect. I guess I was thinking of Jasper and Seth -getting- together, not being together already. But this fic is good all the same! I like the idea of it. "Sex isn't the only way to get off." As soon as Jacob said that, my mind went to oral. And the other possible ways. Good thinking Jacob! Jasper and Seth do need it.

    And I don't wanna get technical, but I'm curious. "Sometimes, the younger's smell was sweeter than any human's blood he had had the pleasure of encountering." I was always thinking about wolf/vamp relations, and how they smell bad to each other. So is the sweet smell because they are imprinted on each other?

    I'm definitely not a grammar nazi, but I know I make silly typos too. Sometimes I just read through my work to try and catch the darn buggers. So I just wanted to point out that, "And, with that, the youngest shape shifter leaned forward. His little pink tongue *peaking* out" is spelt *peeking*

    Yummy, some Seth and Jasper action! Two-shot? Did you plan it as a one-shot? Will it be longer than two chapters, or are you just thinking of making it something short? Lol, I thought I had heard the chapter title somewhere before. I use song titles as chapter/story titles as well. It gives me ideas and is kind of addicting.

    Anyways! I loved it! Sorry for my ramblyness. I look forward to more!
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