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Reviews for The Newborn

By : belladonnacullen
  • From shelleyschenker on March 24, 2011
    I love to watch the way you have woven this prequel - i have read straight through to chapter 22 and now sit (as with your others, like the Necklace and the AU of Dr. Swan) anxiously awaiting your next chapter. I hope that your author's note at the end is true and that you actually do write every night - I am totally captivated by your take on all my favorite characters. Please update soon!
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  • From NaliKurashi on January 15, 2011
    Please, I love it, you must update more ; ; *die-hard Edward fan* D: I'll beg you!! I really really wanna know what happens next lol :D ; ; I even made an account here on AFF just so I could review your story lol T.T don't leave your new fan waiting! ; ; /sniffle
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  • From trulygreat on May 23, 2010
    OH - amazing story - am so hooked! Read all 22 chapters today. Please update soon!

    I know it will take awhile, but I am excited for when Alice and Jasper make an entrance:)
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  • From trulygreat on May 23, 2010
    OK, just finished Chaper 17 - LOVED IT! Emmett was always the most easy going and I love

    1 - how he immediately feels about Rose

    and

    2 - how Edward realizes that there is a reason Carlisle did what he did!


    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH great chapter!
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  • From trulygreat on May 23, 2010
    Oh wow - loving this story. I ahve always wondered about Edward "pre-bella". And I think you are doing a very nice job of showing the horrors he is going through. Just about to start Chapter 13 . . .
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  • From heartkiller on February 21, 2010
    I know I have reviewed your writing 2 other times, but I just can't get over how much of an amazing writer you are!! Chapter 20 was def worth the wait keep em coming!!
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  • From LadyExcalibur on February 12, 2010
    Perfection, as always. I want to say again that I love your characterization. I especially love the attention Emmett gets, because he's one of my favorite characters and seems to get MUCH less attention that he deserves!
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  • From VanessaWolfe on February 09, 2010
    Like everything you have written, love it! You know Edward as well as SM does I swear! I really liked reading about how the other joined the family.
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  • From heartkiller on January 30, 2010
    Please please please please please PLEASE tell me that there is more to come!!! You are a fantastic writer I think I said that in my last review, but it needs to be said again!!!!
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  • From heartkiller on January 27, 2010
    This is by far the most amazing story I have ever read. You are a very talented writer and Stephanie Meyer has nothing on you!! This story story is fantastic please continue to write and if there is anything else that you have written please let me know I would love to read it.
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  • From LadyExcalibur on January 27, 2010
    Every chapter is better than the last! It's so very nice to see this wonderful exploration of their early years.
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  • From Firelady112 on January 07, 2010
    Oh, I love your Emmett! He's so playful, so funny, so sweet! And yes, I'd love for you to do an outtake. His POV or Rosalie's, doesn't really matter to me. You can write anything and make it perfect, you know that! ;)

    I really feel for Tanya though... there's no telling what I'd do if I found out that one of my (day-)dreams was actually more than a dream, or wishful thinking, or whatever you want to call it...
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  • From TheBlindQueen on January 07, 2010
    Every chapter is my "new" favorite chapter. Okay, this chapter was... Well, amazing! I can't imagine that Ms. Meyer could do their early years any more justice that you've done here. Emmett is spot on, his exuberance and joy in whatever life throws at him is portrayed with perfection. And Edward? Well, what can one say about him except, "Sigh..." Yes, he's here in all his glory.

    Lovely, lovely work.
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  • From TheBlindQueen on December 22, 2009
    There were so many things to love about this chapter. I am blown away by how effortlessly you're revealing so many things about them. Their predatory instincts are a part of who and what they are - the urge for dominance, possessiveness, and need to protect their own - these are all part of the vampire's character. And each of these characters is so flawlessly themselves! Nothing rings untrue in their words or actions, all of it seems as if it would be canon in the Twilight 'verse. Beautifully done, as always.
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  • From TheBlindQueen on December 12, 2009
    This story never fails to move, delight, sadden, and intrigue. Yet another flawless chapter.
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