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Reviews for The Brother I Never Knew

By : fusedtwilight
  • From DarkYinYang on March 09, 2011
    So... I glanced through this fanfic, and I couldn't help but see one big block paragraph here of font. You might want to fix it so that it is easier to read.
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  • From ANON - babaksmiles on December 19, 2010
    I can't believe I missed this story but it's sooooo good. Jamie is such an interesting original character. I mean on one hand he is totally scary but then his interest in Leah makes him human. I actually respect him for fighting the imprint because he does have a point, the imprint makes them slaves and shouldn't he be able to choose who he wants? I absolutely love it. I wonder what you have in store for Leah.
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  • From Mamacita on June 17, 2010
    Please correct your disclaimer

    It does not contain one of the two required elements—namely, the part in which you state that no profit is made from your story. It can be worded however you, the author, like, provided that you state clearly in some fashion that you make no money/profit from the story.

    Failure to correct the disclaimer will cause your story to be hidden from public view after a week or so, but not deleted; you can still correct your disclaimer, which will then be unhidden again as soon as possible. Continued failure to correct the disclaimer will cause the hidden story to be deleted in time, as will re-uploads of hidden stories.

    Below is a link to the Terms of Service in its entirety:

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    In addition, the next link is to the FAQ regarding disclaimers:

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560

    Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.

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  • From Mamacita on June 16, 2010
    not sure if you're aware of this, but either you are missing chapter 6, or the chapters are misnumbered as there is no chapter 6 posted. ???
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  • From ANON - Nesa on June 07, 2010
    I really like this story a lot! I really hope that Jamie and Leah get together, they would make such a cute pair. Honestly, I never liked imprinting in the novel. I thought it was stupid and it made me really mad when I heard the back story of Leah, Sam and Emily. I kinda hate Emily to be honest...but I was more upset with Sam over the fact how much he had hurt Leah. Leah is my favorite werewolf besides jacob in the series and I think she deserves to be happy.
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  • From ANON - Rita on September 27, 2009
    I like the story the idea is good i don't trust jamie and some part of me hope this is sam and leah in the end but who know i will keep checking for an update i loved your last story so i'm looking forward to what you will do with this one
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