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Reviews for Revealing the True Mates

By : Matterhamlin
  • From ANON - Imani on July 17, 2011
    That was fucking fantastic!! I loved it!! SOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!
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  • From PhebStur on May 12, 2010
    Omg! That was .... Epic! See Bella or Rosalie dont need to exist. Wonderful writing. Very Lustful. Horrah for Emmett the dominant. Keep it up!:P!!!
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  • From ANON - Blanche on April 08, 2010
    At times I found it steadily unbelievable, There needs to be a balance between smut and story and while the smut is good I feel like the story is lacking.
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  • From ANON - may on February 18, 2010
    This story is WAAAAY not what I expected, but I found that I did enjoy it very much. It was surprising and refreshingly different. Good job.
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  • From rerickson1983 on January 05, 2010
    This is the best Twilight slash story I have ever read. The Edward/Emmett/James/Jacob pairing blew my fucking mind! I'm all for the double penetration idea. Also, I hope you kill off Rosalie and Bella eventually in this story. Also that Sam and his pack gets what's coming to them.
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  • From spooksies on December 14, 2009
    *blood dripping out of nose*

    okay..............


    lost my train of......of.........of.................................


    *passes out on floor from blood loss*


    this is hubby typing........wow.......she is out!
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  • From VindictiveDiva on December 11, 2009
    Certainly wasn't expecting that. I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Tsuyu on December 06, 2009
    Oh my! Alec is such a genius! Double penetration would rock their socks! But I hope the reviewers with their silly ramblings won't influence the author! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Alec Frazier on December 06, 2009
    Hi,

    I'm loving Revealing the True Mates! A few (naughty) suggestions: Have your foursome engage in double penetration. That way, two of them could fuck one up the ass at the same time while he gives the fourth a blowjob. References to pubic hair are always appreciated. Maybe Jasper could go smooth as part of his sub role? Also, it seems like at this point, nudity around the house would not be such a big deal, providing that sex is still somewhat discreet.

    Regards,

    Alec
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  • From ANON - Tsuyu on December 06, 2009
    Oh my this is becoming a huge drama! I hope everyone will be ok!
    I want more of the 4 mates romance and more of Jasper and Paul (oh my what a pervert I am!)
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  • From ANON - Tsuyu on November 29, 2009
    This is the first Twilight slash fanfiction I am reading (even though I am not new to the slash world). And I found your story truly amazing and it got me hooked up on it! I wanna know what will happen next. *blushes*
    Update soon please!:)
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  • From celticdewin on November 28, 2009
    Really liking this. hope to read more soon. I also would love to know who Alice's mate is. Seeing as she is the only one without one. Don't really care if it is m/f or f/f, just curious as to who you would pick.
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  • From ANON - Alecto on November 18, 2009
    I think this story is wonderful, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From lavender666 on October 27, 2009
    There needs to be more Edward/Emmett stories

    This was really good
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