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Reviews for Pups and Tykes

By : fusedtwilight
  • From SandmansAngel on December 12, 2009
    I loved how this story is going so far, it's getting so exciting reading the chapters in each one. I loved how you did some history in this chapter it was really good. I also hate that Max character very much, and how you made him so evil was pretty good. Also I want to say that I'm sorry for not keeping up with the chapters lately; I had a really busy last week, and my grandfather passed away so that is kind of why I haven't been reading your chapters lately. Which now it really helps, and I hope Leah and the rest of them kick the Makah or whatever they're called asses. And kicking the crap out of Max, and I can't wait to see the next chapter of this story.
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  • From SandmansAngel on November 30, 2009
    I love how this story is going so far, and keep up the good work I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. Also if anyone is reading this could someone read my story that is on here. It would mean a lot to me is someone did, and to know if I need to change anything in the story.
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  • From ANON - Illyra on November 17, 2009
    I really like this story. You develop the characters and make them very believeable. I also like your very quick updates. LOL!
    But there´s also a little downside. Your spelling. I know it´s one of my personal pet peeves, but especially in this chapter the spelling was sometimes atrocious.
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  • From SandmansAngel on November 16, 2009
    This chapter is really good so far, and I hope nothing happens to Leah when they get there. Also I hope you update soon I would like to see what happens next in the story it's getting really good.
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  • From SandmansAngel on November 09, 2009
    Oh this was a really good chapter, I was like "That son of a bitch" and "Oh hell no they didn't" when I read the part when everyone talked about the other tribe. Then when that asshole Tristain talk to the others in his tribe I was like "Oh you son of a bitch, no you didn't". If I was there I would have kicked his ass so hard he would be crying for his mother. I hope you update soon I would love to see what happens next in the story.
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  • From SandmansAngel on November 08, 2009
    This is getting really good, and I hope that Seth takes Tony's words in to heart. I really don't want anything happen to Leah and little Sarah. I can't wait to see what happens next to the story, and I hope you update real soon.
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  • From SandmansAngel on November 05, 2009
    It's getting really good so far, and I can't what to see what happens next in the story. Also I can't believe that spirit made Sid do that I was like "Noooooooooooooooo". You're doing a really good job on this story, and I hope you keep doing what you like doing.
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  • From SandmansAngel on November 01, 2009
    This chapter was really good, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story it's getting very intresting. I'm so glad that Seth and Tony are friends again; then with Kim cutting her hand, then the whole Quil thing with Claire, and now poor Embry hurting Sam that was so sad. I was like "noo" when I read the parts where everything bad things happening to the LaPush gang. I hope they find out who ever the evil spirit is that they send that sorry son of a bitch to hell!
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  • From caliha on October 30, 2009
    I have to admit i hate twilight, but i love your stories. I had come back to reread, and lo and behold! You have started a brand new fic! This is great! So Victoria must be back and now she's playing mind games huh? I can't wait to read more!

    Small but i noticed a few typos (i NEVER nag on typos as I am the reigning Queen of Typos, but you seem to like your work precise *which is why i love reading your work!*), the only one i can think of right off hand is the 'boo's' for booze.

    Please don't take that as any sort of criticism because I think you are wonderful and your writing impressive!!
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  • From SandmansAngel on October 24, 2009
    This was so cute, and I loved how you put Tony's thought into the story in that way. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. I hope you update soon, and keep up the work.
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