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Reviews for Eternal Nightmare

By : christineyoung
  • From ANON - Fairy Flame on May 22, 2014
    Please write more!
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  • From cynfulme on October 01, 2013
    Very interesting....
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  • From ANON - Kimari on September 23, 2013
    i like it and would read if you did more

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  • From kassandrakieu on January 09, 2011
    Omggg, you must continue this! Love it. By the way... It's 'ciao', not 'chow' (:
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  • From DaOnleeSam on May 27, 2010
    this story is amazing! update asap please.
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  • From trulygreat on May 01, 2010
    OK - I have to say - WOW!~ At first I was in shock that you killed off Alice and Edward. But the Alec, Demetri & Bella angle - I LOVE! I can hardly wait to read more! The last chapter - the one with Carlisle - was hard to read. Their anguish and torture as their family is wrenched apart was so hard to read. And yet, the feelings expressed are to me closer to what probably would have happened. Edward, as much as I liked him, was a bit of an idiot.

    So, please - go on more with the 20-something Alec, Demetri & Bella - loving it!
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  • From Firelady112 on March 06, 2010
    You're asking if you did a good enough job with this chapter... Well, I'm sitting here crying like a little girl, is that enough of an answer for you...?

    Amazing, and yet so very very sad... please update soon!
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  • From Safir84 on February 19, 2010
    I’ve recently read this wonderful story over at fanfiction.net and I absolutely fell in love story, so now I’ll also review it over here, sorry if it’s the same review, with a few modifications, but I’m a little lazy!

    I absolutely love and adore this story of yours, it’s so good! The plot’s awesome and the character portrayal and character interaction are too, of course! I really enjoy all of the different point of views, amazing to be honest (I really liked Bella’s, I absolutely loved Alec’s and I adored Demetri’s as well!). I’d love to see what Jane thinks of Bella and all of this, maybe you could write a chapter from her p.o.v. just a thought?! Everything’s also extremely well written, very beautiful indeed!

    More so, I love the fact that this is a slightly dark story, I love darker fics, and that Alec’s an incubus, which makes him even more sexier, if possible, lol, but not too dark, obviously, hehe! Anyway, I really enjoyed the pace of their relationship (Bella/Alec) it’s not rushed and seems very realistic, I also really liked Bella/Demetri’s friendship, so sweet, I’m, glad that she has found at least a friend in the castle!

    Now about Felix, he’s absolutely vile, I don’t care for him at all, I hope that Alec, with Demetri’s help will be able to protect Bella from him (Felix), that is?! Aro really isn’t much better, okay, so he doesn’t want anything to happen to her, but he blackmailed her into all of this and was the real cause of her loss and grief, in my eyes, at least!

    Now I cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…


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  • From tee980417 on February 06, 2010
    I am really enjoying this story. I just joined the site and I couldn't stop reading this story and my anticipation for more is overwhelming! Good job!
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  • From theladykt on February 04, 2010
    Wow great story so far
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  • From lileeyore76 on January 12, 2010
    Ahh this is so getting good. I'm loving it and can't wait to hear from Demetri or see what Carlisle has to say about his son and daughter's death and his adopted human daughters condition. Please hurry.


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  • From BimboTrance on January 10, 2010
    It's so rare to see a mind control story on here! Your my hero!!!!!
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  • From pandorarose2006 on January 10, 2010
    hmm had read your other story, and was intrigued to read this one. i like it keep it up for sure
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  • From LadyExcalibur on December 30, 2009
    This is really good and has TONS of potential! great work!
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  • From lileeyore76 on December 28, 2009
    I still think Demetri will turn on the Volturi and help Bella escape the story is just heading that way. It could be Alec helps her himself he seems to be melting around Bella. A chapter from Alec's point of View would help and maybe even from Demetri's point of view how they feel about everything that's happened. Its going so good I can't wait for the next chapter installment.

    Happy New Year to you too!!!!
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