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Reviews for The Tale of Jack

By : DancingGrimm
  • From Tahn on November 24, 2015
    I love this story. I hope you write more like it.
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  • From ANON - Tahn on August 22, 2014
    Loved this story. Very well done, very sweet. Now I'm hoping for a story about the man in green though. Thank you for the wonderful stories.
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  • From animekid on April 12, 2013
    Shoot I love this story. Chapter five and its wonderful. I never thought to see such a common concept turn into something so original.
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  • From AbbyRose on January 28, 2013
    I didn't really know what to expect from this story, but I have to say I was pleasently surprised, and really enjoyed this retelling of Jack. I don't think i've ever seen a good giant story, and i like how it was connected, but not connected to Little Red.
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  • From Kip on October 14, 2011
    Absolutely loved your magical tale! It was a long time coming, but more than worth the wait! Thank you for putting such an entertaining story into words... 'Purr
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  • From ANON - Kit on October 13, 2011
    I really starting to fall in love with your verse. wonderfull tale!
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  • From ANON - UtenaTenjou10 on October 06, 2011
    I think this is the best modern take on a classic fairytale I've read. So glad everyone got a happy ending and that bastard teacher got his!
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  • From Invercio on September 02, 2011
    I had to register to this site just to tell how much I liked this story. So adorable! Although I was a little unsatisfied because the setting of this story had so many possibilies that went unused. For example I like to imagine Jack sitting on Finn's flaccid cock, and then when Finn gets hard Jack would be lifted up - wheee! Or he could've fucked his urethra. :o Or sat on his face and cummed in Finn's mouth, not having to care where it landed. Or, most importantly, a cum bath! :D
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  • From ANON - waterwolf on June 27, 2011
    "From the other side of the street, in the shadow of a silver birch, a man dressed in an ornate green suit watched the happy group go by. A satisfied smile briefly crossed his face, closely followed by a look of tender sadness..."

    OMG Talk about the altimate cliff hanger, no hint as to whats coming next. I do hope you continue this. Please do more of this story and little red with suger, wipped cream, sprinkles, and two, yes 2 cherries on top.
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  • From CandyCakes on June 26, 2011
    Amazingly cute and sweet story, everything played out exactly how I wished it would. I'm going to start reading your other stories now because this one was just too cute for words.
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  • From ANON - Airam on June 10, 2011
    Great story! Really well done, and very well Beta'd. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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  • From kylee123 on June 08, 2011
    Love the ending! Even Goldie found happiness. I laughed at how the town denied any connection with Mr Golightly when he got into trouble. I think you did a very good job of portraying all the characters in the usual small town environment. The man in green has secrets? I cant wait to find out about them. I did however wonder to myself if Finn's house was still up there in the clouds for them to visit from time to time.
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  • From ANON - Ltuae42 on June 06, 2011
    Man, this story was awesome, and the fact that you gave it a really honest to goodness happy ending all around just made it even more so. I've been checking for updates for months, and am super glad I did. Kudos to you, for writing characters I actually care about ^_^.
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  • From uniqueindividual on June 04, 2011
    Great Story! I loved how they all got a happy ending(except the crazy teacher). But now you have me curious about the man in the green suit. If it is in another story, I will totally read it!
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  • From tar on April 07, 2011
    I cant wait for the next chapter this is just great.
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