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Reviews for The Tale of Jack

By : DancingGrimm
  • From kylee123 on March 20, 2011
    OMG! I need that Goldie goose ASAP! I am so excited for Jack. Now that I think about it, I see why Finn chose to give Goldie to Jack. He knew that she would bring him good luck. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From uniqueindividual on March 15, 2011
    Wow, Goldie really does lay lucky eggs...Poor Jack and Finn...:'(
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  • From uniqueindividual on February 27, 2011
    I am so glad you continued this story! I think the whole relationship between Jack and Finn is just so tender, sweet, and sad. I want to know more! What will happen with the bastard?(you know who I'm talking about) Will Jack ever get to see Finn again? And what the frack is up with the dude in the green suit?
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  • From kylee123 on February 05, 2011
    Waah! How could Finn send Jack and Goldie away? I guess he does not realize that Jack needs to have a friend too since the people in his town are so unfriendly to him. I feel sad thinking about Finn being up there all alone. I wish Jack and his Mom could go live with him there. I hope Goldie will bring some pleasant surprises for Jack and his Mom. Love the story.
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  • From ANON - crazykidnikki on January 14, 2011
    Love to read more of this. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - nonentity on January 06, 2011
    Surprisingly sweet fic. I like that you're exploring various aspects of Jack's life, and Mr. Golightly makes a fabulous villain. I like that Jack goes back and forth on whether most people are good or bad.
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  • From ANON - DDoP on November 12, 2010
    Man, this is great! I love you're style. Have you ever considered doing an adaptation of the steadfast tin soldier? it's one of my favorite fairy tales but nobody else really cares about it, and its just screaming out for some slashification. cheers.
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  • From kylee123 on November 11, 2010
    Thanks for the new chapter Dancing Grimm. What will it take for Jack to stop selling himself? Things are getting pretty dangerous for him. He already has a stalker with that crazy teacher. Maybe he should take a trip to try to sell more of his coins. I hope his tests come out okay but like the doctor said, Jack is risking a lot especially when his mother is depending on him to take care of her. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I wish Finn could come to the rescue.
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  • From ANON - LockedBox on October 30, 2010
    This story is Brilliant!! i cant wait to see what happens next, you write so wonderfully! Ive never read a fairy tale story like this before and the minute i picked it up i was so pleasantly shocked, your characters and beautiful writing has officially made my evening :)
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  • From mw0627 on October 13, 2010
    Hey! This is a great story so far, and unique too. No one does this fairy tale. Keep going!
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  • From pradlee44 on August 17, 2010
    wonderful, wonderful. But I have to say, that was a terrible cliffhanger to give to your devoted readers. Tsk, tsk. Jack and Finn's relationship is seriously sweet, and I'm waiting for some more improbable events to happen so that they can live happily ever after.
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  • From ANON - phen on August 16, 2010
    This story is just so...charming! The world is vibrant, and the relationship just all warm and fuzzy. I really like the harsh contrast between "above" and "below" as it were.

    I really, really hope this continues. Great to see it was updated not too awfully long ago.
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  • From Ingwalde on August 15, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this. A few missing words or mistakes here or there but over all well constructed and I'm glad you're not going overboard with the traditional story cliches. This is a very sad and sweet story but here's hoping for a "traditional" happy ending. :)
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  • From ANON - Miss Macabre Grey on July 30, 2010
    I think you are so awesome!! I'm even tearing up bea use I just read it all (much to my dislike) and I forgot to blink!! So sweet! I love they way you set them up and the interaction and the description! Perfect!!

    Captcha: ever find
    Yes, captcha! I did find something!!
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  • From ANON - JJ on July 20, 2010
    This story was great, it's a shame it ended and I REALLY hope you continue it, it was moving in such a great direction and I really want to see what happens so please continue writing it!
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