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Reviews for Control

By : BatPhace
  • From ANON - ShinraWeapon on December 18, 2013
    Oh. My. God. That was probably one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I've always loved this pairing, and you did such a fantastic job recreating them in what has to be the most delicious piece of fanfiction I've seen in ages. The idea of two control freaks mutually surrendering to each other (without letting it go into rape territory, thank you so, so much for that) just blew my mind. There was actually a lot of tenderness there, especially in part 2 with Artemis, even if they don't quite see it that way. It's kind of like, for as evil as they seem, they aren't THAT evil, you know? Maybe to others, but not toward each other. I guess even "villains" need people they can come to trust. At any rate, your writing style was top notch. There wasn't a single flaw that I noticed. Your descriptions were steamy, and everyone stayed pretty much IC. My only complaint is that Jarlaxle ended the story on a sort of "to be continued" vibe, when he wonders what he got himself into. And so now, I want to see more on how their relationship develops, and that calls for further stories... Anyway, thanks for writing this. It's truly wonderful.
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  • From LadyShadowflame on July 12, 2011
    Very nice... You manage to combine well-written smut with something that seems quite in-character for them, which is an impressive combination, since too many fics out there lack one or both of those things.
    Awesome stuff.
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  • From spooksies on April 27, 2011
    i find the Drow Elves a......senusal race of beings. so this piece was......YUMMY!! both chapters!!

    got more?
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  • From on April 05, 2011
    That's the best I've ever read of this pairing. Well done!
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