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Reviews for When It Rains

By : Illiandyandra
  • From ANON - HGM on July 18, 2012
    You really don't need to make up kindergarten cartoon lines to put in Morelli's mouth to make him look bad. For making him look bad? Really? And the fact that you need to either means you have a two year old's grasp of characterization or you just make flagrantly OOC stuff up to make characters you don't like a) not even remotely resemble themselves and b) behave cartoonishly over the top, which either way means you're a poor writer and I'm decidedly off this bus. I don't even like Morelli, but after that I would definitely not be looking forward to seeing what you do with characters you LIKE.
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  • From happymeb on November 04, 2011
    Wow love the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From NegraGatita on August 26, 2011
    This is a really awesome story, I hope you continue with it. It's imaginative and well written.
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  • From Bleudiablo on August 03, 2011
    Just fantastic, is all i can say
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  • From Cindylee on June 01, 2011
    Oh this was so hot!! These are my fave book charactors, love reading a mature, adult version of them!! Anxiously waiting to read more!!
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