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Reviews for Dreams Beneath a Starfilled Sky

By : DragonEyeZ
  • From ANON - Olivia on September 12, 2015
    Where's the rest of the story? You had this published on lavender eyes.com..but it was longer..
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  • From felis1215 on April 26, 2010
    Aw, so sweet!
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  • From FlionndaWall on January 09, 2009
    OMG! I LOVE IT!!!!! So hot and steamy, yet perfectly tasteful! Yummy! I SO wish I was her! And I am checking out the site you listed!
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on March 24, 2005
    I've bookmarked your website, and finished reading the last chapter. The way you ended it there was kind of a let down, because having Drizzt deal with Catti-brie's eventual death and his continued living would be an interesting read, and a great way to continue, should you so wish. But I understand the need to finish, so I will say I've kept this bookmarked, and will return to read the more... er, interesting parts again and again.
    Thank you for this wonderful story.
    AmberRose
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on March 06, 2005
    Yes! You've updated again. This is one of the hottest fics I've had the pleasure ;) of reading.
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  • From ANON - roger on February 02, 2005
    do you ever use spell check?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on January 26, 2005
    Though I have only read the first two chapters, the story has promise (I will read the rest, don't you worry!). I just have a couple of comments, hopefully to help you. :)

    When you type a story, its best to either indent, or, in the case of most internet publishing sites, put an empty line between paragraphs (or both, if you're feeling really ambitious). It seperates things a little better for the readers, and actually makes it easier to read.

    Secondly, I don't know if you have a beta reader or not, but from what I've seen so far, I would suggest you find one. I don't mean it to sound harsh, there are just a lot of little things in the way its typed that suggest you don't have a beta reader (aka, editor). Missing spaces, double typed words, typos, that kind of thing. It is not a slate on your writing, far from it. Usually I am constantly rearranging sentences in my head to make them sound better (to me, anyway), but I didn't do that at all when reading your story. Quite a few fanfic sites, especially if they have a forum, have access to availible beta readers. Or I would be more than willing. (I realize you don't know who I am at all, but I love reading/refining/editing written works, and am more than willing to help out any author who needs/wants it).

    One thing I noticed, is that sometimes things seem the tiniest bit... not rushed really, but just not quite as long as it seems they should be, like sentences were cut out or something. As well, you could probably combine some of the chapters. I.E. Chapter two. While I see the importance of Regis recognizing what happened, I'm not sure this piece of information is important enough to have its own chapter, especially as short as it is.

    So, now that I've told you all the "bad" things about it... lol How about some good things, eh? It may not look like many, but everything above is very minor.

    I really like the opening of the first chapter. Yes, it is very similar to Elaine Cunningham's book, but I think it fits well. I also really like your characterization (its well done!) especially of Drizzt. A small confession - though I have been a Drizzt fan for five years or so, it never occured to me that there might be fan fiction about him, and when I did finally look for some, I was a little worried that it might be horrible and would totally ruin my view on one of my favorite literary characters of all time. Fortunately, this being the first piece of FR fic I have ever read, it did not.

    If you have any questions about any of my comments, or about anything else (betaing, editing, suggestions, etc) feel free to e-mail me: open_destiny@hotmail.com
    I look foreward to reading the rest of it.
    - Lindsay
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  • From ANON - Lucifer on December 31, 2004
    that is a change in Drizzt that i have never seen before....i approve, very good work. Please write more in the future
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on November 11, 2004
    I can read this story over and over and still really 'feel' the sex scenes. I really enjoy this story a lot, so I hope you might work on it again. *goes back to read more*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2004
    Never got past the first chapter. The sex scene stolen straight from Daughter of the Drow was a complete turn off.
    And, not that I ever liked Cattie-brie, but why is she talking like a complete numbskull? She had only a little bit of the dwarf's accent...and none of the dwarves were that bad.
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on June 24, 2004
    Update! PLEASE!!!!!
    A~R
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on May 22, 2004
    YES!!! Update time! Too sweet, I knew she'd say yes. I really love this story, so updaten pln please!!! (and good luck on the finals)
    A~R
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  • From ANON - celticdewin on May 18, 2004
    Wow, and I mean WOW! I added this to my rec. reading. I hope you continue it. It is really about time that those two got together! I'm glad someone else agrees!
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  • From ANON - ladyShiva on May 17, 2004
    wow..I was just randomly looking for something to read, and spotted "Forgotten realms" on the category list. I intantly wondered if there were any Drizzit stories. I come to find that i'm not the only one who thinks he deserves some lovin too! You know what i'd like to see as well? A Drizzit/Alustriel story. Maybe just a one shot. n.n
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on March 15, 2004
    Oh I knew it had to happen eventually! Baby Drizzt on the way. Update soon!
    A~R
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