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for The Stray II

by mishap

person tejinashinsenofelvenfire
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... hope you add more to this one.

There were some errors here and there. But it was really well done. And had my favorite kitty!

Great story so far. I want to know how it ends.
person MarzBar
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will add to this. I would dearly love to read about the vile humans who did that to Brad getting slaughtered.
person BelleRose, aka George Cooper
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, pLeAsE, PLEASE continue this story. It's facinating, insightful, and just plain addicting. I wanna, wAnNa, WANNA know what happens. You've got a great plot line and the only suggestion of any kind I can make applies more to the prequel to this story which you seem to have taken care of; the small matter of grammar and punctuation. Please keep writing and I look forward to the following chapters of Stray II. In fact, if you have a mailing list I'd love to know when the next chapter is done.
person Ale V.
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and just recently found it. I would really love it if you update it, This story just needs to be told!!
person S.M.
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible
person Bernadette
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I know it's been a while wil will you be updating this?

~B~
person Mrvampire30
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THE STRAY I and II have got to be the best Anita Blake Fan fics on www.Adultfanfiction.net . pelese update soon and offten.
person Jane
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! That is soooo sad!! ARG! I wanna go after the guys that hurt my le ble buddy!! Awwweee man if I was a kitty I would mind the pointy teeth if I could rip them a new one....Grrrr! Anyway! I'm really happy with the last two chapters! Keep'im comin!!
Very childlike response from Brad, makes the reader feel close to him. The rest of the pards reaction was reassuring. I love the fact that the vamp's have adopted him as well! This kid has more protective family than he gonna want when he grows up!! "If" he grows up..
*hint hint* (write until the end)

hugs!
Jane
person TigerBlak
schedule December 14, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this story again. After ff.net got rid of the NC-17 stuff and then got rid of the section altogether I thought that would be the end of that. But lo and behold, a new fanfiction site I have found with some of my old authors...please tell me you plan to continue with this story. I really like it.

Laterz

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