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May 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So sad and bitter. Loved the flow of speech
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* that was so beautiful and sad. You wrote both brothers so perfect! I love Raistlan so much in your story. Good job.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work. Sophisticated and delicate.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful peice, hope you write more!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit. cryicrying.
It's hard to love your sibling. Very very hard.
It's hard to love your sibling. Very very hard.
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I found your portrayal of Raistlin's emotions and thoughts extremely interesting and quite original. I liked how this was written, the format, and how it was more bitter than sweet. Awsome story. :D
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June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Twisted and rivetting. Excellent stuff. I like. :-)
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April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Very beautiful and poignant. I can't wait to read more of your writing!
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February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. This is incredible. You captured Raistlin so well with this. The emotion in it is wonderful, you truly are a great writer.
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October 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
That was so twisted... and I absolutely loved it. ^_^; Your writing flowed so smoothly... ah! I don't know what to say, other than this is a great story, and the possible squickiness didn't squick. =P