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Fianlly an author who does Hook/Pan right! I love your story. Please continue.

Brutal - but well done! I always wanted to see a Peter/Hook pairing! GOOD JOB!

I'm glad that Peter escaped. I look forward to reading what happens next.

A good new beginning. Now I'd like some new chapters in the other end as well.

I love the new first chapter! Update soon and in the meanwhile I'll be thinking about all the eloquent, complimentary things I can put into a review when you do.

:) Glad you posted the chap, hon! I love how smoothly you made the transition here from Hook's anger to lust/love, and Peter's innocent defiance to jaded reluctant acceptance (though he still shows a smirk when he can, *hugs Pan*). Very awesomely done, and the story definitely feels much smoother.
Now how about the ending? ;) j/k, take yer time... good things come to those who wait.

Oh, it's so wonderful! I LOVE it! (And it's really sick of me to say that. It reveals my inner sadist.) But, man oh man, you can tell a story. You write...beautifully. That's a cheap way of saying it, though. I can't come up with the words! It's astounding. Breathtaking. Heart-stopping. Shudder-inducing. Sinfully glorious. Never stop writing when you've got such a God-given talent for it. (And to think I'd bring up God in this situation... I'll be damned to Hell for this. Eternal damnation, do you hear me?! I read your story in spite of eternal damnation. Damn. You. Damn you and your rotten writing that sends me into fits of ecstasy! ...Now I feel defiled. Bless you. Bless you so dearly!) You know, I envy that sort of talent. You'd better be making some sort of profit off your writing skills or else that's just a cruel unfairness of the world.

Anyway, live happily. "Let the words flow."

By the way, will you let me know when you update? I don't visit this site often, so I'm not likely to catch an update on my own, but I really would like to read more. Thanks!

Lovely realistic.

Great story. fantastic. can't wait for an update. I was so absorved that i didn't even notice the sky becoming dark outside.