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"see I can reasonable after waking up" Is not good grammar.
A good idea, but not so good follow-through. It just needs a
good read-through and edit, so find a beta. Please.

I really like your fic. I think you have a good plot development and again I agree with every one else that I like how Julie is alot like Anita. However I want to inform you (though you may know) that the idea of having two fathers is not far fetched. They discovered it in a species of monkeys. The monkeys have twins every time and two dads, because the twins belong to both fathers; they share stem cells. Its kind of cool. So the idea that Julie is BOTH Jean-Claude's and Richard's is plausible. SO if anyone gives you hell about it you can shove that little piec tri trivia back at them.
ywayyways I need more fic. Please.

can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible

Great story idea, and start. I like how you have modeled Julie after Anita.
A few editing notes: triumvirate is the word LKH used where you use 'trimutive'; fey is plural for faerie, 'feys' is not a word; and you have quite a few other spelling and grammar errors. If you'd like, I could beta for you.

Why do I get the feeling that this story is going to end up a blend of AB and MG? I mean, I don't have a problem with it, in fact it sounds really great. Anywho... I like the direction you're taking this and all. I really like just how much Julie is like Anita. And, while the whole genetic engineering thing is slightly far-fetched, it's great. It's the kind of far-fetched that's so far out there it actually sounds like it fits.(I swear that's a compliment) I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this motely crew...cough...bad pun...really bad pun...

Ah, yes. The look likes the beginning of a good fic. I always wondered what would happen if Anita ever had children...