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Ahh! Write more... please?? I love your writing style and the story so far... continue!

Please write more I like it so far it's better than a lot of cross overs I see.

Oh dear God.
You did it.
^_^ I just read the first chapter, and I love it already!
You have her writing style down just right.
Yay!
The only thing I have to say is this.
I HATE BUFFY.
A LOT.
...
But that means that your writing is good. Because I'm reading it.
And not just because I hope Buffy dies.

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MORE!
The people demand MORE.
Please?
I would help you out with idea-thingumms, if I wasn't such a terribleawfulbad writer.
Plus, what I do write ends up coming out Terry Pratchett-ish, and let's just say that wouldn't fit.

... Um. Yeah. I don;t know what happened to my last review, but...
It was supposed to go like this:
=>.<=
More!
The People demand MORE!
I'd help out with suggestionummy things, but... all of my writing comes out Terry Pratchettish, and that wouldn't really fit.
So... yeah. Write more. Or else... I will continue to review using meaningless rambles that accomplish nothing. Ahahahahaha!

Aha! I figured it out. I think.
No kittyface for you.
... Um. Yeah. I don;t know what happened to my last review, but...
It was supposed to go like this:
More!
The People demand MORE!
I'd help out with suggestionummy things, but... all of my writing comes out Terry Pratchettish, and that wouldn't really fit.
So... yeah. Write more. Or els I w I will continue to review using meaningless rambles that accomplish nothing. Ahahahahaha!

So far so good. I can't wait for Anita to meet Buffy. You seem to have a pretty good grasp of the characters. You may want to expand a bit on what the others are doing while all the alphas are away. What the leopards who are staying behind will be doing as Cherry hasn't been mentioned, I don't think. Is Zane going with them or just helping witht he loading and if he is going with them how is he going to deal with the separation from Cherry. Nathaniel and Jason in the same room as Richard. Wonder if Richie boy knows about Jason and Anita's mattress mambo in CS? Did Richard bring Jamil or Shang Da with him, can't imagine him leaving both of them home with Sylvie. And who did Jean-Claude leave in charge of the vampires and his businesses?

Okay that's enough food for thought. I can't wait to read more. This is off to a great start and I'm hoping you have as good a grasp of the Buffyverse as you do of the Anitaverse.

JaToya

ooo...i'm interested. I like Buffy and I've read all the Anita Blake available. I'm axious to see Anita and Buffy meet, size each other up and all. And to see their reactions to one another's lifestlyes as well as seeing each other in action. Hope you right more. ^^

I like where this is going so far and would love to read more of it soon please!!

A very interesting start.
You have peaked my interest and I look forward to seeing where this goes.
You are handling the first person well.