rate_review Reviews

This was beautifully written and the concept intriguing. I'm a fan of Morgan, being named after her and all, so I enjoy seeing her in such a light.

It think your story is quite good.

My only big concern is with editing, there are many typos that detract from the quality of the text. This may be a problem that stems from cutting and pasting of file transfer. I would merely suggest reading through the story again in order to iron out the missing words and odd truncations.

Cheers.

I loved your story, Morgan as a woman instead of the priestess is a good twist.
Morgan is sexy. Yet still a woman with feelings.

I found this work very evocative. The aurtherian legend has always been thus in my mind. It is a story of people trapped by the roles that they
are forced by their society to play. I have always been fascinated by the "villians" in literature. Thank you for this glimpse into the heart of one of my favorites.

Well, I love the way your words flowed, and the description. It was very beautiful.

Here is something I'd definately recommend.